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for Sour Sugar

by paulinhakawaii

schedule June 14, 2017 at 12:00 AM

This story is...strange. the pairing is awkward but by golly do I love it. I do wish Lucian would come back to do some *cough* take them down a peg or two...or five. I understand why he doesn't though. With being married and all but it wouls be so nice to see. 

The writing is actually pretty good. 

I am on Dobbys side, they need to have a baby sometime soon. Shake things up a bit lol. 

schedule June 10, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Okay, odd, but smutty. Looking forward to more. SP

schedule December 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Very good Valdy doesn't stand a chance.  But I still want them to have a family, I'm weird I know.