Nice start, would love to see more
Sorry, I haven't been able to review for a while. Work has kept me swamped. I really like how this story is coming together. What's going to happen when they make it to the center of the maze?
Please correct your disclaimer.
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I am very excited about this story. I like where it is going so far. Can't wait for the next chapter to be uploaded!
This has promice, I can't wait to see where you go with it!