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for Pitch

by Alcoholic_Rootbeer

person Anon
schedule September 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Excellent story.  Reading over this in one sitting(as opposed to Sex Ed) proves that while you do write good smut, you really shine when it comes to plotting, character dynamics and dialogue.  Take a bow, m'lady.

person Nae
schedule September 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I absolutely love this one shot. Can you add even two or three more chapters? 

schedule September 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Loved it. His desire, angst, lust, and love all together where great to read. I also loved that he completely missed that she must have been interested from the beginning if she followed him and then went into the lockers with him. lol  Another lovely job! Thank you! HG4eva

person Yep
schedule August 31, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I like.

person Lovey_reader
schedule August 31, 2016 at 12:00 AM

That was so sweet. I liked it. Your oneshots are always awesome but I always wish that they would be more. But thank you anyways for sharing.