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for Five Days

by RavieSnake

person Anonymous
schedule January 14, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Such an amazing fic.  I had to stop reading and take a few breaks during the last chapters so that I wouldn't start to cry at work!  I look forward to reading the rest of your stories!!!  Thank you for writing this one. 

person RynStar15
schedule December 21, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Beautiful!! Enthralling piece, very well written and engaging. I am very picky about reading stories, but this one was great from beginning to end. Thank you for the story!!

person T-W-O
schedule October 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Not sure why this isn't being read by everyone on this site, but I think it's great.

 

Well done!

 

t-w-o

schedule September 21, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I really had a rough time with this story. I once got stuck in a cave passage when I was in my 20's. I was only stuck for about 30 minutes but those 30 minutes were the longest century of my life. I didn't think I had a problem with it, that was almost 35 years ago and I still love cave crawling. But your descriptions brought it all back. I loved the ending. 

person Jaxy
schedule September 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM

You know I didn't come here to find a story like this one but I'm so glad I did. So great! Thank you for writing it!

schedule September 11, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I'm sorry I didn't review earlier, reading most chapters after one another. But chapter nine and ten are so sad.

schedule September 11, 2016 at 12:00 AM

You really got to ne with main character death. But pfiew he pulled through, lovely epilogue, stil counting days.

person Pops
schedule September 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Well congrats, you succeeded in getting me to cry pretty much for all of the later chapters T_T

thank God everything ended happily or all those tears would've been wasted! Thank you for this story, I loved reading it! Also loved all the crazy amounts of facts in there--I'll know some survival tips if I'm ever in a bad situation!

person Anyisa
schedule September 9, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I absolutely love the story!! Thank you for sharing it with us.

person Anon
schedule September 9, 2016 at 12:00 AM
wonderful story full of angst and drama. absolutely loved it. the ending was just right. now i demand two no three chapters for songs of regret.