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by waymay

schedule September 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I never liked Rin he's immature and inconsiderate.

Brandy isn't a word they use in the UK.

But other than that it's a hoot.

 

schedule September 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM

The back and forth in time were well done! I laughed out loud at her drunken antics and his reactions to them. I had forgotten about Ron and George, too, so when she remembered and went back, I winced. lol  Poor guys. I think her guilt played into her anger, but I hope Ron heard some of what she said, because she wasn't wrong, even if she was wrong. Thanks again!! HG4eva

person Anon
schedule September 5, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Just read chapter 2! I would have read all of them in one sitting, but this weekend had me so busy. Just wanted to say that Chapter 2 was just as amazing! Keep the momentum going. :) 

person Reaper
schedule September 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Great fic. Keep up the awesome work.

person Sarda
schedule September 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Holy crap -This fic is hilariously awesome! Everyone is in character and so cleverly written! I can't wait to read chapter 2. :) 

 

person Sarda
schedule September 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM

PS: the french "accent" was AMAZING. I was giggling the entire time.

person Anon
schedule September 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM

A very unique concept for these kinds of fan fic. I love it, and the characters are really well written. Great job, and I hope to see more updates soon! 

schedule September 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM

You guys got an out loud laugh at the wheelbarrow! Thank you. That was fun. Draco's initial panic over her visit made me giggle, too! Thank you!! HG4eva

schedule September 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Thank you once again. :-) His life of utter failure and hopelessness, next to hers of optimism and hope is intriguing. I look forward to more really soon! HG4eva

person Anonymous
schedule September 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Empire's been awesome and entertaining so far! I love that the two of you are collaborating on this!! Can't wait to see more.