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by waymay

schedule September 24, 2016 at 12:00 AM

They're so awkward and shy it's almost too sweet, snarky Draco is my favourite let him drop his guard.

schedule September 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Well aren't they awkward? lol His inability to see good as just good, and her inexperience with harmless flirting had me smiling. :-) Thanks again! HG4eva

schedule September 22, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I laughed that Draco gets that much joy out of taunting Ron. Yes, Ron needs to control his anger, but Draco needs to grow up and get over it, too. lol The fact that Hermione almost swooned...hilarious! But, her getting the prototype made was lovely. Thank you, dear.. On to the next chapter, so conveniently waiting for me. :-) HG4eva

person Pottheadfolife
schedule September 19, 2016 at 12:00 AM

We need more!! Please, I've been checking back everyday to no more chapters! Give us more!!

person Bri
schedule September 17, 2016 at 12:00 AM

You writ such great dramione but I think I'd pay you to write a George Angelina fic lol

schedule September 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Oh this was so funny, riling up Ron. I never cared for the 'ninny'.

person Victoria
schedule September 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM

This story is a delight on so many levels. I'm especially enjoying the interplay between Draco and Hermione and all of Hermione's actions to put Ron in his place after years of frustration with his idiocy. The intrigue about the embezzlement from Draco's companies adds a new layer of interest that's very satisfying. I am eager to read more.

person Raz394
schedule September 15, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Must. Have. More. 

schedule September 14, 2016 at 12:00 AM

IT's either Astoria or could it be Ron and George?

schedule September 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Even though there was no meeting between the two, I liked how you got them to realize they might have feelings for the other. :-) I laughed out loud at Draco have to court Blaise's mother to get back his friend. And, I enjoyed Draco tricked Madoff. Beautifully done! Thank you, HG4eva