Bloody buggering hell. Harry Potter fanfiction is my secret guilty pleasure and I almost blew my cover in front of the hubby while reading this chapter.Thanks for that Love. Buuuuuut...ooo..er Missus. I'm intrigued as to how Hermione is going to eventually want and keep such a man-ho. If of course that is what is going to pan out. You have literally got me panting for more. BTW.....summer and heatwave in Lancashire lasted for just about 72 hours. It is August..school holidays and bloody cold, wet and dreich. Your story is the only heat being generated at the moment.
Best wishes, Love Ali xxx
"How can you question his motives? Surely he is above reproach?"
Thank you so much for making me snort-injure myself.
Oh God! This was an excellent chapter. Dirty dirty goodness. The emotional beginning was juxtaposed so brilliantly with the sordid end.
Fav lines (and fixes):
"arm that hung like a broken branch"--Great comparison.
(Overactive is one word.)
(Watching Ginny’s pale digits slinking seductively down his smooth black, Hermione held her breath.--There's a word missing in this sentence . . . or you meant back instead of black.)
"Hermione crept up the stale carpet of the stairs, releasing the sticky bannister"--I think it's the visceral nature of this description that made me squeal with delight.
"the cup over one breast ballooning as his fingers enveloped it."--I don't know why I love this, but I do.
Oh! You wicked child. Cliffhanging me at such a delicious moment. Whatever will our intrepid heroine do?
OMG...did he really say that? Yes he did...coz he's the Snapester. He who must be obeyed. On a serious note though, Love, this is absolutely brilliantly written. It flows and definitely leaves you wanting more...much more. Anyway looking forward to a bit of a heatwave both in the UK and your steamy tale. Best wishes, Love Ali xxx.
Ah! My dashing hero! (But I wouldn't put it past him to have sent the troll himself just to look good in front of her.)
There's going to be a huge cat-fight in the Ministry once he works his way through most of the female payroll. Katie's got to calm the fuck down. They're just casually shagging, not dating. Holy hell. She's going to wear herself out if she freaks out about every female he hits on. (But I feel for her. Jealousy's a tricky devil.)
Fav line this time was "As long as he whipped me with it afterwards.”
--Ah. Too true.
I'm dying to know what player Snape has up his sleeve next. Naughty boy.
The depraved side of me loves assholes like Snape here (nice guys don't finish last, I just like giving the bad ones a good long lick for taste-testing purposes). I'm definitely more of the Katie Bell variety in this instance (except I prefer going commando--but after that g-string assist, I might have to reevaluate my postion on panties).
Fav parts were
"leaning back in his chair to give his crotch room to expand"--He'll need more room for Nessie. He better go out in the hall.
"women with thighs that could crack walnuts, riding cock for their country."--Go for the gold.
"tracking it up her inner thigh until she gasped and clutched at his thigh with desperate fingers."--Unh!
"dragging at the G-string which still clamped her clitoris, twisting and abrading it mercilessly."--This goes in the pro g-string column.
(And just when she thought she couldn’t possibly do any more to her--he couldn't do any more to her.)
(no more than a shadow—apparating--Capitalize Apparating)
(a devious squib--capitalize Squib)
I can't wait to find out what happens next. Tell Marriage I'm loving this.
Interestingggg.... I look forward to see how he'll try to seduce Hermione xD this is gunna be good :D
-MzPearlz
You know what my dear? This depravity and sleaziness is going to earn you a fortnight at the Severus Snape School of Correction for Wayward Girls.....but seeing as you are so bad....you're only going to get a week...sorry! And yes. He is still an utter and complete bastard! God you're good. But you're not...You're BAD. Christ I'm confusing myself. Must be all this talk of opiates.Best wishes, Love Ali xxxxx.
Quite frankly....too bloody good...if that's possible. He's a real bad bastard but he's still our bastard..yes ladies? Best wishes, Love Ali xxxx.
Hahahaha! Snape's already getting the best of her. Hermione's going explode soon (whether from sexual tension or anger I can't guess).
Favortie line was "How would I have survived in the world? That was my hand job hand after all.”
(But I also liked "seething with unspent fury")
So looking forward to what's coming next.
Love the depraved, slightly dark angle on this one!