Brilliant
Oh, hell no! How did a Hogwarts letter got to Julian? I thought they wouldn't find him since he's no longer Harry Potter? Please update chapter 12 soon.
How dare Dumbledore dictate Severus' personal life. What a manipulative bastard.
Can't wait to see how Julian managed to get two letters - like he said it shouldn't be possible.
Glad the Malfoy's have an open mind
Ch 10. Julian is such a sweetie. Hopefully Draco can rise above his upbringing and negativity
It's nice to see the Malfoy's a little more open minded, especially little Draco. So young and innocent, yet you could already see that his parents influence was starting to show. Can't wait to see what'll happen next, please update chapter 11 soon.
Lovely!!! I like it a lot!!!
Great chapter!!!! I loved it!!
Ch 9 Really enjoying it so far. Can't wait for Draco and Julian to meet. Lucius has a lot to learn. Ack for the cliffy!!
I like this as a concept and would like to see how it progresses. Just, please stick to one tense! It's incredibly difficult to follow at times, so rather than enjoying the story and getting swept away by the narrative, I'm having to work out what you mean. (Oh, and FYI "due to" means "because of", so the twins have streaks due to an accident; not "do to" an accident).
Loved some lines in this: "Nugget King of the Hippogriffs" (I so wish Harry had chosen that as his name!) and "six generations of Malfoys just rolled in their graves" (made me smile as I was imagining poor Lucius shaking his head in total disbelief). SP