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for Shake it, Bake it, Brew it

by Blackkitten23

person Jan
schedule September 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I see both Owl and Vampire can't get away from Harry's teasing, poor Trocar being teased for being a mother hen. I can't wait for chapter 9, the Malfoy's are finally coming into play😃

person CDGaymer
schedule September 22, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Nice chapter, so can't wait for dumbledork goes of the deep end. Plus I hope H.arry will get all the help he needs.

person HeartsGlow
schedule September 19, 2016 at 12:00 AM

You keep saying he wasn't used to big meals. Why? He just spent TEN MONTHS at Hogwarts, where he could eat anything he wanted, and has only been "home" for two days. How tall was he before the potion? I am guessing around 4'10", or 4'11'. (average girl at 11 years old, but even tho' being a boy, he was shorter than everyone else) So 7 inches taller would make him about 5'5" to 5'6"? Being almost 12 now, that's taller. I'm 5'6" and my youngest was my height at 12 to 12 and 1/2.

person Nadine21
schedule September 14, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Hello I love the story so far. May I inquire if you are posting it somwhere else, like maybe AO3? I am asking only because there I get a notice as soon as you update. Looking forward to the next chapter and have fun writing.

person Jan
schedule September 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Lol, poor Hedwig, being teased by Harry like that 😂 please update chapter 8 soon.

schedule September 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I am loving this story. It is captivating and well written.

person Meechypoo
schedule September 12, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I'm really enjoying this story and loved Harry's reaction to Dumbledore's "friendly advice"! I can't wait until the goblins gather all of the evidence against Dumbledore and the Order of the Chickens! Boy are they in for a rude awakening. Snape's going to be in prodigy heaven when he finally officially meets Cache! So much happening and I can't wait for the next chapter.

~~ Meechy

person CDGaymer
schedule September 12, 2016 at 12:00 AM

very interesting story so far, keep up the work.

person Bellemorte1330
schedule September 11, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I hope you keep this up, it's one of my favourites!!!  I check almost everyday for a new one lol. Please keep up the great work! 😁

person Jan
schedule September 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Oh, wouldn't it be yummy if Harry and Sanguini hooked up!? "Yummy, vampire play😍" please update chapter 7 soon.