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by Blackkitten23

schedule June 23, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Interesting concept. Not sure how I feel about making Severus suddenly look attractive (by societal standards). James, Lily and Sirius need to be smacked around the head - HARD. FYI, we don't have 'Goodwill' in the UK. You might want to change it to "charity" or "charity shops". SP

schedule June 22, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Oooohgg this is a good sorry!!, loving tje different spin you put on this!. Harry sounds gorgeous in his current look!, snape as well. Love how the malfoys are decent people and especially little draco!!. As for the potters and sirius wow scumbag alert!!. Thank younfor this story i await your next chapter!

person Jan
schedule May 14, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I can't wait for the Potter's and Sirius to be outed in front of the whole wizarding community, what will the people do when they find out how hippocrates and abusive they can be. Please update chapter 10 soon.

schedule May 10, 2017 at 12:00 AM

amazing!!! Can't wait to read more!!!!! 

schedule April 15, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Great chapter!! And very enlightening!! Harry's childhood was a true nightmare! And definitely the Potters the worst people of all, I'm feeling so sorry for Harry's siblings, but thank to the previous conversation violet and James will have a chance to denounces all the abuse they being made object by their own parents

Thanks for the chapter!!!

schedule April 6, 2017 at 12:00 AM

This story is fantastic I can't wait to read more I exspecialy like the switching of light and dark alliances with gives the story a fantastic twist as the characters have been well developed and thought out 

person Jan
schedule April 6, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Oh god, poor kids, I hope Albus will be able to help little James and Violet, and remove them from James and Lily's custody. Please update chapter 9 soon. 

schedule March 7, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I can not wait to see what Severus do to the Potters.

person Jan
schedule March 1, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Wow, talk about being straightforward, and not beating around the bush; I hope the anger in Severus eyes is not directed at Harry himself, but more towards the Potters and their cruelty to their own child. Please update chapter 8 soon.

schedule February 28, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Poor Harry he just have the worst luck just only to have those monsters as parents! I believe Severus is going to give him the happiness he deserves!! And certainly this story is getting more and more interesting!!! Please update it soon!!!