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by Blackkitten23

person Jan
schedule December 5, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Oh, I wish someone would just stump all over those arrogant fools! I really can't wait for their reactions when they realize whom Harry truly is, and when he removes the children from their custody 😈 {muahahahahaha) Please update chapter 15 soon.

schedule December 4, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I read this on fanfiction.net. ^~^ I like this story and am happy to have it continue.

person Jan
schedule October 19, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Yes! Finally! I have been waiting for this lovely, beautiful moment, when Severus and Harry became one for a long time.😍 

i wonder what mistakes Doc's wishes to correct...🤔

Poor Severus having to deal with Sirius extremely poor pickup lines. Wonder if Sirius will notice that it's Severus right away or if it'll take him a while to figure it out... Please update chapter 14 soon.

person Jan
schedule October 17, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Wonder what Harry is gonna think of Severus new look? If it is Wyatt, I hope they finally catch him! After Harry has gotten the chance of hurting him.... in self-defense of course😜  Hope the meeting between Harry and Remus goes well. Please update chapter 13 soon.

schedule September 30, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I actually pouted getting to the latest chapter of this story...... It is amazing, just like Duel Enrollment. I enjoy your original ideas, and it stinks that I have to wait (along with many others, I seem assured)  for both of these stories to be updated as there are others that seem to need an update before this one and Duel Enrollment. 

schedule September 30, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Oh my glob stopper this is good. At first I wasn't going to read this cause I couldn't get the movie characters out of my head but oh my am I glad I got over that. This is beautiful

schedule September 11, 2017 at 12:00 AM

took me a couple of months to check again so happy this story is still going

person Jan
schedule August 6, 2017 at 12:00 AM

It's good o see that the truth of the Potter's is finally unraveling slowly but surely! Please update chapter 12 soon.

person Jan
schedule June 29, 2017 at 12:00 AM

OH I hope they're able to quickly find a way to catch Wyatt in something so he can go bye bye fast! Cause I'm sure he's behind why there is a speeding car heading towards Severus at the moment.

on another note.... Peter and Remus? How sweet are they being? Can't wait to see more of them! Please update chapter 11 soon.

schedule June 24, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I bet Wyatt is behind Severus' attack! He already hates him, and because sev is having a relationship with Harry and that could be the better way to hurt Harry! I hope Severus' reflexes will be fine and he not being hurt in any way! On the other hand I like your choice of future boyfriend for Remus and I guess when Sirius, James and Lily realize that they're going to be so angry!! jejejeje can't wait to read more!!!