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for Fire Built on Sand

by Lomonaaeren

person SParker
schedule February 7, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Hadn't realized you wrote other stories lately.....very nice.

schedule July 26, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I so liked this!!! I like that it had a very narrow focus and goal and showed the in's and out's of Draco scheming like Draco does but for a positive benefit... that just so happened to coincide with his goal of making a point to his father lol. So Draco. I've been missing a lot of reading because of a lack of time but I'm glad I got a chance to read this one :)

person Kain
schedule July 26, 2016 at 12:00 AM

lol loved this. It had some background Drarry and the rare platonic Dramione. It was nice how they were on first name bases and that Hermione gave him a chance at redemption despite his past with her and that even some of the other Slytherins, angry about the old generations warped ideology that almost ruined there lives, decided to back her in a show of defiance.

Like seeing Draco put his Slytherin cunning to a noble cause while at the same time ruffling the old bood purists feathers. Gets to be a good guy and have some fun.

person Anonymous
schedule July 26, 2016 at 12:00 AM

You are always so good at writing your characters' inner thought processes. This short story of Draco as political operative shows off that talent. I think every candidate ought to have a Slytherin as campaign manager. 
--Victoria