Just lil bit confuse about this story. Hermione already prego at the first chapt, but it seems like you wrote another story with same premise at the third chapt. Where is Hermione's chiod at the first chapter? And the ending, poor Ron and Hermione....
I can't believe I am saying this but I loved the story(realisation just hit that I love darkfic). And I believe the child she is carrying is not Rons but Draco's. And maybe at the end of it all she becomes so messed up she starts to miss Draco and she would hate herself for it. Say Ron escapes from Azkaban or wherever he was taken, he would just be a reminder of the life she should have had. And the only person she would ever truly love is her son after he is born, and Draco is jealous so she kills him because she would never let him harm her child the way he ruined her.Anyway I am getting carried away.
All in all I loved your story.
This is so dark but seriously one of my favorite fics of all time! I can't tell you how many times I've read this story. Though the idea of a sequel, like other reviewers mentioned, is interesting, I think You summed up the ending beautifully; there's no doubt that Malfoy planned every step and Hermione is truly trapped. I'm thinking the only thing I'd ever wonder is if the baby really could've been Malfoy's. Oh well, just something to tease my brain!
Given all the times Draco has apparently raped Hermione, why does he just assume her baby is Ron's? It seems like there is at least a chance that it's Draco's baby. If you ever felt so inspired, I'd love to read a sequel to this revealing whether Hermione has her baby, what happens with Draco, if Ron tries to tell Harry and Ginny the truth about what happened.
You could totally make a sequel to this story! I totally want to know if that baby really was Ron's. I mean it could seriously be Dracos!! Awesome dark story! Cant wait to finis reading your other stories!!
Oh wow, I read this story yearsss ago. Like maybe 9 years ago? Takes me back aha. Well, there you have it! You're officially my favourite dark author of all time! AKxx