Possible whoever you pair Luna with, to keep her from focusing on Draco and Hermione? Could foil her plans and make it harder for her to resist. Or something like that
Keep it up!
Shallow, weak plot and awkward. I tried to give it a second chance but, no...
And a beta is needed desperately.
I truly enjoy this story and hope you continue despite the few negative reviews. Can't wait to see how Narcissa handles Hermione!
Weird story...not worth reading anymore
I think you should have lucius offer to punish hermione. he clearly knows how to do it as well.as snape. also y not have snape and lucius discuss hermione and draco's contract. are you going to.give the back story about when hermione first came to snape and was he her first? i like your writing style just make your chapters a little longer and show a little light on your back story. but I'm enjoying it!!
I do like where this story is going. The only issue I have is the punctuation. Would you like someone to beta your chapters before you post them? Personally I think it would be a bit helpful. Other than that, like I said, I do like this story and am looking forward to seeing where it goes.
Yay! And so it begins! Draco and Hermione dating! I can't wait until the next chapter! This is starting of really interesting!
I really want to.see where you'll go with this. and also the idea of lucius and discipline is just too yummy a picture :) . did have a question so hermione wants snape to punish her right? (also yum)
I love where this story is going! I can't wait for the next update :)
Very interested to see where you go with this, loving it so far!