I think Lupin should take Dobby's place (and death)at the manor, and Hermione should be there but not recognized yet. Maybe she could be the one to throw the knife and hit Lupin?
Yes Lupin should go to Malfoy manor with Harry and Ron
No they shouldn't recognize Hermione but maybe Lupin could smell her or something.
no, don't kill Lupin. I like him for the most part.
I think it would great revenge for her friends who left her to see her with draco with the malfoys and deatbeaters as her allies, lupin should come since he is the reason they left her behind...maybe have hermione "punish" him as ordered by the dark lord. curious does draco only punish her now? does snape have feelings for hermione as well? I think her.ione should take a dark turn...she did kill molly. I have to admit a few chapters were hard to follow but it was worth it to stink with this, def a great story! if you find a spot you should throw in public sex with draco and hermione (possible snape ) to enterain thr death eaters. ;)
please keep posting! this is really unique and not like any other dramione fic i've read. one suggestion i have is that it might be interesting to draw more of a clear line between hermione's death eater facade and her true self - some cute dramione scenes could help with that,,,(;
You've really intrigued me, I wasn't a huge fan at first but you've truly won me over. I can't wait for chapter 15.
This is a fabulous story. I'll bet you were posting some of the chapters when the review function wasn't working on this site. I am sure you have many, many readers.
I can't believe Hermione is going to have to be intimate with her future father-in-law. Yikes! I think it would be better to 'train' Draco to punish her. We'll find out soon.
Hermione has entered a dangerous, dark world! I suspect, because she got so angry after receiving a letter, that the letter was from Lupin and she has chosen to murder him. She had already said she resented him for taking her place with Harry and Ron in the horcrux search and he knows the secret that Tonks revealed to him. The only problem is I don't know how she'll find hi. Maybe the letter said they'd be returning to Hogwart's to look for the diadem or to attend an Order meeting? I hope I find out soon if I guessed right.
Every update makes me so happy. I can't wait to see how this plays out.