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for Anyone On The Line?

by Severus1snape

person ARFleets
schedule August 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I really like that Dudley grew up and came around, I guess the whole hiding magic thing was already thrown out the window since he knew about harry when they were kids, huh?

person Anonymous
schedule August 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Just found this site and your story.  First one I've read on this site.  I'm a long time reader on Fan fiction.net.  I'm surprised at how well everyone is taking Harry  and Lucius connecting or planning on connecting.  Get a kick out of Dudley in wizarding world after the way HHhe and Harry were as little boys. Harry is an angel for forgiving him and Dudley has courage for even approaching Harry.

 

person Jan
schedule August 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Oh, I. Ant wait for chapter 5, and all the fun at the club😁

person djaddict
schedule August 5, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Oh dear lord no, not Ron's voice.  How about Draco's voice after a few drinks.   Lol

Sio, what did luscious Lucius say, hmmmmm?

schedule July 29, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Nharrg.

 

*Mops up puddle of drool on keyboard*

 

That was hot! Now I have to go write about Harry and Lucius and Dittany paste.

 

Um... So minor spoiler. But you probably already saw that coming.

 

Anywho, very hot, and I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter! I'll be checking back every time I get a second to think. (Which might not be very often during August, but we'll see.)

person djaddict
schedule July 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Whew! Bloody hell, that was hot!

person Anonymous
schedule July 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Oh my god that was unbelievably hot!

lane

person Anonymous
schedule July 26, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Omg! That was HOT! You seriously write some of the hottest scenes. I love them all. I can't wait for more.

Oh a little thing tho.....I think that you meant for harry to be exCited and not exited. :)

 

-lovey_reader

person Anonymous
schedule July 26, 2016 at 12:00 AM

This story, I must admit, has become a highlight of my days when I see updates. First chapter felt a bit dull at first, but it was only the first and I didn't want to give up on the potential, as I've seen a lot of your stories and have fallen madly in love with your writing, so I kept reading, and the second chapter definitely caught my attention. And now, I'm hooked on your writing once more. So please, do keep writing, because it's rare these days to find a writer who makes good stories, which are also so well written and so intriguing. Thank you for sharing your talent with us all.

person Anonymous
schedule July 25, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Finally! Thank you so much for this. I've been stalking this story for days, checking every few hours praying for chapter 3. Then I checked again and saw this and screamed "YASS". I'm the the one that bookmarked it and asked if it was bottomlucius. Im going to have to make an account.