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for Anyone On The Line?

by Severus1snape

person Vicky
schedule May 17, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Plzzz plzzz update soon plzzz plzzz I love this book

schedule March 10, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Omg I love love love this. I can't wait for more. Thank you

person Zelphie
schedule September 29, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Aaaaaah!!! I just read all 16 chapters! They have delighted me and made me giggle throughout the couple of days I progressed through your chapters, and I am SO eager for more!!! Thank you for continuing to write this! Lucius/Harry fics where Lucius isn't magically turned into a sweet hearted "good guy" devoid of Canon characterization and flaws are hard to find these days. I want the grittiness of the fact that he's not a good person, but he can have good traits and treat different people differently depending on circumstance and how much he values them. Your Lucius certainly skirts over his darkest parts, but I am enjoying this fic very much regardless!

 

I was lol'ing at Harry trying to make Lucius run into his arms via jealousy. Very teenage, which is appropriate. Lucius was a death eater--he had to control himself through a lot of shit worse than seeing a maybe romantic interest noodling about like a horny teenager!

 

I'm really enjoying this. :) Do you publish fic on Ao3? That's where I usually am.

schedule September 8, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Omg~ you updated! And I missed it >< damn... Ah well. I really look forward to reading more. ^°^

person Jan
schedule August 21, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Yes! Let the courting begin! Can't wait to see what Harry's gonna send Lucius as his first courting gift, please update chapter 17 soon.

schedule August 14, 2017 at 12:00 AM

CH16 - Ysy for Draco sorting out Harry. Not sure how well courting is going to go, but it's better than sitting around feeling sorry for yourself! SP

schedule August 13, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I wonder if Draco would be so willing to help if he knew it was his father Harry is after? I can't wait to see where this goes. 

person staar
schedule August 13, 2017 at 12:00 AM

ok I finally read it and I like !!!!! poor harry , man malfoy is being an ass ok !!!! so let's see what happens now with the courting !!!:):):)

schedule August 11, 2017 at 12:00 AM

So this was a ship I hadn't looked into before.  I might revisit them again. Very good story. Super steamy and sexy, though appears unfinished at 15 chapters? 

schedule August 10, 2017 at 12:00 AM

CH15 - Well that was a hot ending! Lovely smut. SP