Complex, heart-breaking, and very, very HUMAN. Another excellent story.
I'm not a fan of this pairing but I thought I should leave a note to tell you I really found myself appreciating your style and writing skills even though I find the idea that Lucius would EVER change his ways very unlikely - he's just to much a bigoted b**tard to stop being an a**.
The story seems to be winding to an end and I hope Hermione survives and gives her "pure-blood prat" what he deserves for giving her twins!
I'm going to check out your other stories looking for some Ron/Hermione goodness.
Whoever wrote the last review doesn't understand my hottie Lucius. Lucius, tight ass and all, does whatever it takes. I love older men and May-December romances. If marrying Hermione and working for Kingsley makes it better, Lucius will get behind it. Bet she isn't giving that bed time up.
I can't wait to read about the twins. Will they be the new Malfoy heirs? I'm loving Narcissa controlling her husbandly hunk. Lucius can be stupid and stubborn! I hope they have boys and then he knocks her up again.
Great story. Ignore the last review. LM/HG ROCKS!
I know most readers on this site dislike HG/LM but I have to tell you how much I like this story. I'm all for fluff and occasional crack but it's time (now that Cursed Child has taken us into the realm of adultery and illegitimate children with Delphini) to handle the many outcomes that might have occurred. I love Molly Weasley, the fierce mother lion but this story uses her losses and her breakdown so effectively to show another interesting "what could have happened". I like to think Lusius Malfoy's coardice makes him more susceptable to someone like Hermione. This story does a great job of capturing that.
I'm sad that Granger Enchanted has gone to that web site resting place in the ether because this would hae been a strong addition to Malfoy Manor. I hope you'll post it on ff or aol so more readers can find it (I read your profile and understand despite your issues, even though I think the admins who run aff do a fantastic job).
I can't wait for the finish. Balaur and this story are moving to favorites.
Keep writing. I 'ship this all the way!
I don't know if I've reviewed before or not, but I love this story, because I've always seen Molly as just this kind of unhinged harridan, yet few writers seem to share that vision. Her obsessive love of family is way beyond what's normal, IMO, and the loss of her son has driven her completely batty. Now, since she has harmed Hermione, perhaps those who have sheltered her will find the courage to take her down.
I can't wait tosee what happens next!
I really like this; it's a very unusual perspective on events. I've always disliked the Weasleys, and I'm not surprised at Molly's meddling, and her sudden dive into insanity. I never thought she was all that tightly wrapped. I hope you'll continue this soon.
Excellent story!! I'm enjoying the post-war intrigue very much. Read your profile. Please let us know if you do end up loading your fanfiction elsewhere as well. Thank you for writing.
Great story! I love the start and direction. I hope you continue.
I looked on other sites as your profile says you planned to move this year but I don't see you :-( are you staying on aff.org? I don't want to miss any updates!!! Check out ao3 or ff.net or Hawthorne and vine. They all have fairly good systems...
Poor Draco! I've never liked Molly Weasley. I can't wait to see what Hermione and Lucius can accomplish together. They're a formidable pair.