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for All Is Dust That Is Not His Heart

by Lomonaaeren

person Anonymous
schedule December 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM

SP777

This could use a third part..and you know it.

person Lunar
schedule December 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Mooooooarrrrr, we need moarrrr

 

person Anonymous
schedule July 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM

...that's it?

person Kain
schedule July 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM

ooh Beauxbatons Draco eh? Well this is a new one.

Love the 'mentor/big sis' kind of vibe Fleur gives off and how Draco tries to please and emulate her, its cute. Whats her opinion on some of his more predudice quirks, such as referring to muggleborns as mudbloods etc and his family's reputation?

I loved that transistion from Draco thinking how he has to be extra clever to him getting immediatly confronted by Harry. I lost it at Harry sicking Hermione on him as payback, poor bastard having to endure an hour long speech  and how that is the thing to solidify his hatred towards Harry lol.

Gotta give points to Harry for taking the badge thing in stride and even verbally one upping Draco by calling him out for wasting his talents on childish devices.

 

Nice to see Draco start to feel guilty and even apologize.

 

nice little bit of pre-slash.