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for Buttons

by OracleObscured

person Lissa
schedule March 22, 2017 at 12:00 AM

This was so hot. It felt like the TMG Snamoine, so it was super fun to watch it all unfurl in my head. Your erotica scene always make me jump my husband. I think he appreciates you more then I do. hahahahaha

person Jessii
schedule January 18, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Oh so true. Damn those buttons.

person Fox
schedule August 12, 2016 at 12:00 AM

O my fucking god!

Oracle, I always loved his buttons, but now I'm completely demented! My brain is full of Snape images...Snape, the mysterious knight in his buttoned-up, not-so-shiny armour. I would be ecstatic, if I was allowed to pop them all open, one by one and then give him the tongue bath...mmmm

My absolutely favourite bit was:

You got me something? How thoughtful. I wonder what it is? Button. Button. Button. Gasp! It’s your dick. Just what I wanted. How did you know? -It's always my most cherished present too, ohh just to submerge my face in it and sniff it out of the slumber.

Yep...still single...my rule of not fucking around certainly wasn't my most brilliant one...I'm ravenous.

I was excited to find another of your stories, your writing is superb, I looove the imagery. When I read your stories, I honestly feel as if I was watching a memory in a pensievie :-)

I will be waiting for your next (promised) chapter story. Is it coming along, can I read it anytime soon?

Love 

Your Fox xx

person Anonymous
schedule July 9, 2016 at 12:00 AM

My favorite line: "Her name punctuated the end of his come-grunt like an emphatic exclamation mark." Silly but sexy - loved it! -dezzu

schedule July 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM

That was wonderful!

Button sex?? We must be sharing the same brain!

So I captured my favourites as I went. There was probably more but, like you say, it’s difficult to focus sometimes. -

‘only his face danced with artificial life.’ – lovely vivid visual.

‘and the most perverse Pensieve in creation’ – sexy.

‘His focus was breathtaking. Especially when it was directed at her.’ – can so imagine this.

‘She hoped he’d be able to walk once she was through with him.’ – Hahah!

Button. Button. Button. Gasp! It’s your dick. Just what I wanted. How did you know?’ – I can so imagine you saying this!

‘blindly deposited his book on the end table behind him’ – excellent visual again.

‘pressing her pussy to his perking placket’ – quadralliteration!

‘A soft sound of pleasure escaped her throat and bounced against her lips.’ - Lovely

‘Other people might call it glaring, but she called it foreplay.’ – So do I!

‘ten tantalizing portals to ecstasy’ – noice!

‘row of rainbows’ – I just loved this.

‘anxious dick dancing derail her de-frocking’ – another quadralliteration!

‘like bear in heat’ (missing an ‘a’)

‘He’d be fingering them the next day during class’ – love the thought of this.

‘hair scattered and his breathing sharp’ – simple but effective.

‘cock walloping’ – just so good.

‘lubricious’ – one of my favourites as you know.

‘creaming his cock’ – just because.

‘rising sea levels and the smell of dampness pervading the dungeons’ – Witty and Sevvy.

‘misted his forehead’ - lovely

‘ wooden shock’ – Great!

‘barricade himself in buttons’ – funny and excellent.

So I guess I just C and P’d the whole thing back (that’s what some of us just like to do I guess!).

You were right – I loved it a lot! You can probably tell :)

I think I know someone else who is going to be extremely pleased – a mutual friend with a frock coat fettish . . .

person Anonymous
schedule July 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM

All these alliterations xD that was awesome! Ever heard Buttons, by the pussycat dolls? That's what I heard when I saw the name of this story tho I did not realize the kink behind them x3 I'm well informed now!

person Anonymous
schedule July 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM

O. M. G.  I am hyperventilating.  I know what I'll be dreaming about tonight!