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by Alcoholic_Rootbeer

person MzPearlz
schedule August 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Phew. Well then...... I feel like Neville's not gunna drop it and that he might do something stupid like tell Ron but I hope I'm wrong. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

schedule August 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Wow. I feel like the story should be renamed, "Poor Neville." lol  He has it so wrong, but he is such a good man and friend, poor dear.  And, I hope Hermione withholds sex for a while when she learns the truth. Draco taking advantage of Neville is to be expected, but his childishness in front of students, and then dragging it out is just plain schoolboy-level mean.  She is going to blow her top! I can't waitT :-)  Thank you!! HG4eva

schedule August 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Chapter17 the best one to date, that is so cringe worthy delicious, feeling sorry for Neville and also a bit cross with him for invading Draco's privacy, him getting hot and bothered about those photos, getting the wrong end of the stick about Draco being a gigolo, funniest eavesdropping on conversation ever.

Keep it up you're so good at comedy/erotica, cleverly wrought together. Genius oh and I can rant on forever, shame I cant bookmark this. Maybe I'll put a link to my tumbler page if that's oke?

schedule August 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I hope it turns out as funny and sexually frustrated as It feels like in chapter one.

schedule August 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Brilliant writing style btw. Your style is quite colourful and indeed humourfull.

Oh and you wouldn't believe this but I do teach sex ed to twelve year olds. It is hilarious! The questions they ask and sometimes embarrassing as well, but hey someone needs to teach it huh?!

 

 

person Anon
schedule August 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Oh dear.  I like Neville, but really, he should have known better than to try to match wits with Draco.^_^

schedule August 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM

The beginning was very sweet and loving and his final move was classy as all hell. :-)  Neville finally got brave and was a good friend to her (even if he's wrong), so yay! But, I hope he isn't too publically embarrassed when the truth comes out. Draco had too much fun with that in the end. lol  Thanks again! HG4eva

person Anonymous
schedule July 29, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Had my hopes all types of crushed from seeing the double chapters.

 

(The whole time I read this chapter, if I wasn't eating uo the smut, I was beating on my bed going "why, neville, WHY, NEVILLE. DAMMIT " -cackles- please continue, I'm so ready for this drama right here!!

 

MzPearlz

schedule July 29, 2016 at 12:00 AM

X.X omg I'm dead. Are we sure I wasn't Hermione?  Or Draco? Cause wow *fans self* awww he's staying the night! Ah I'm tingly now lol 

schedule July 29, 2016 at 12:00 AM

That was utter, delicious, smirk-filled perfection! Dayum!! Thank you again, HG4eva