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person Anon
schedule August 19, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Re: Chapter 26

O-ho!  As Good Ol' J.R. would say, "Business is about to pick up!"

person sherlocked17
schedule August 19, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Astoria is sweet as is Ginny.

person lolcraing
schedule August 19, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Oh Damn

person lolcraging
schedule August 19, 2016 at 12:00 AM

That akward moment when you spell your own pen name wrong... :/

person pickles87
schedule August 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Will that extra drop make Neville cocky?  Will he try to get overly familiar with Hermione or take it further?  Not sure if this potion is a good thing especially since Neville is so sensitive.  I think if he did anything to Hermione he would be severely crushed.

Draco will have to defend the young ones and in an effort to do that will spill his secret.

waiting for more.

person Anon
schedule August 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Re: Chapter 25

How DARE you stop it there?  AAAAAAGGGGGHHHHHH

^_^

schedule August 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Seeing 3 updates and not being able to read them was horrible!  But, finally, I have some time... YAY! Neville took it as well as can be expected and was brilliant in getting Draco to fund research for his parents! I am still sorry he's so used and discarded, because him still feeling Hermione's kiss was sad. Their time in the tub was hot, of course, and I grinned widely at his self-admission of love, but I have a feeling him not telling his parents is going to cause more trouble, before it gets fixed... Well, I guess I will know soon, as I have 2 more lovely chapters to read. Yay, you! HG4eva

schedule August 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Why do I get the feeling that potion is going to cause more problems for Neville? lol  So, both admit to being in love with the other to themselves, but are not ready to say it to each other. Check. Both are keeping it from the people they care about, no matter their rationalizations. Check. Both know they're idiots. Check! Both have to spend a night without the other at a party where they can't talk about their true loves.  Check.  So much for you to fix... lol Thanks, hon! Off to read one more. :-D

person K.M.Michaelis
schedule August 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Oh my gosh this is so good! My heart just broke that I got to the end and there is no more yet!14458 

schedule August 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Well, didn't you just set them up for an explosion? ha ha ha "24 hours with the Weasleys… what could possibly go wrong?" Oh good gracious, this is going to be good! First, Draco is so distracted he botches the potion. Loved that he felt bad about hurting Neville, by the way. Then, Hermione is sent into a tailspin about his parents and the party all over again.  EEK!  Now, I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter. :-D  Wonderful, as always! Thanks, HG4eva