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by Alcoholic_Rootbeer

schedule July 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Neville and Draco ripping at one another like 13-year olds, was fun and funny. I thought she was going to call off both dates for a minute there. lol I am glad Neville was okay with them going as friends, just to not spend it alone. I get that completely and their date was relaxed (minus the caffeine overload) and nice.  Draco is sure cocky for someoone so out of his depths. lol I did like his date though. It was romantic, honest, and lovely. I am glad he was honest with her about his life a bit more. The tickling was a good giggle break. :-) I loved seeing your Ginny and I hope she appears again. Her bubbly attitude may come in handy. lol  I am also looking forward to seeing your Ron, as I look forward to his reaction to Draco and Neville's interest, as well as her teaching a subject he finds so taboo.  This should be fun! Thank you and your editor for another fun chapter! HG4eva

person Anonymous
schedule July 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Love the story! Please keep writing!

person Anonymous
schedule July 12, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Just wanted to send a quick note to say how much I enjoy your writing! This latest story has actually made me laugh out loud and there's lots of delicious sexual tension in there as well - not to mention the odd juicy lemon. Love the dynamic between prudish pure blood Malfoy and our favourite sexually liberated muggle. Really looking forward to seeing how this all plays out, you've got a knack for marrying a good plot line with great dialogue and super steamy smut. Well done!

off to jump into How to Train Your Auror 2, another fave ;) Keep it coming!

schedule July 12, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I hope Neville has other options, as I think he is ultimately going to get his feelings a bit hurt. :-(  But, the rest of the chapter... BWAH!!!! I actually snorted out loud several times as Draco's reactions and the children's enthusiasm. Thank you!! HG4eva

schedule July 12, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Best 10 points ever gained by Gryffindor!! lol  I am glad to know you have a plan for Neville, and I wonder if he knew the date when he asked. Draco seeing it as a competition was so "him." lol  And, that kiss... they may actually explode when they finally have sex, if that's the chemistry they have with just a kiss. :-) Thank you again! HG4eva

person Anonymous
schedule July 12, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I have no words. I bow down to you

schedule July 12, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Loooool it! Ten points to griffindor? Aha that's gold! Thanks for updating to quickly. I love your quirky references to the actual book as well. You rock!
person Anonymous
schedule July 11, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I finish every chapter with THE biggest smile on my face. You are perhaps my new favorite author, or at least current favorite :)

person Anonymous
schedule July 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM

So fun and sexy!  Thanks for writing. :)

person Anon
schedule July 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I like this.  The humor feels very natural, from their attitudes and viewpoints, and their banter is very good.  And the 'tension' is nicely done.  Hopefully there's some reciprocation in Chapter 7.^_^