My ideas for this chapter's name - Insecurities and Assurance, or Pureblood Grows a Pair, or Gryffindor Loses Courage, Gains Boyfriend. ha ha ha I loved every second of it. Draco loosening up and Hermione being out of her depth are wonderful to read. Thank you once again!! HG4eva
Awwwww so adorable! And hilarious... I mean of course one of the kids had to try.. you tell someone no there like must do it now! Lol
Re: Chapter 13
Oh, that was some funny shit, there. And nicely mixed in with the seriousness to get Hermione to realize Draco means it.
YAY!!! He grew a pair, possibly. He hasn't actually been faced with his parents yet, has he? lol But, at least he thinks he means it, so that counts in his favor. :-) His sex talk was funny, but I liked that he realized it wasn't as painfully awkward as he thought it would be. Good for her for pushing him to do it! And, I loved that he surprised her in the end, though I was a bit sad for her that she thought it was okay to stay "hidden." They do have a ways to go, don't they? But, that's good because it means we get more story from you. :-D Thank you!! HG4eva
Ah, very nice bit there. Now there's but one thing left.^_^
I've actually never had a food fight (mud, sand yes). But this was cute.
And you just started my week off really well! I laughed out loud at that one. Minerva's shock, Draco's joy, or Hermione's competitiveness... I don't know which was funnier. I wonder if Hermione will ever figure out how much Draco NEEDS to just have fun; almost as much as she needs to be able to let go. I also wonder if Minerva will see through their antics and figure it all out before they do. lol Thanks! HG4eva
I didn't see that coming and I loved every second of it. :-) His thoughts as he fought to maintain control of himself were hysterical, and I am glad he was able to ignore the prejudice words that flitted through. I did shake my head at his comment about not telling his father he'd written to muggles. Kind of sad that he still cares what his father thinks at this point, but I am glad he's getting over it. I also liked that he got 2 things from his desire list. :-) Neville... poor guy, but she was right to be up front with him and I am glad he took it well. I look forward to another week of work and watching him try to meld his two selves. Hermione really seemed to enjoy herself and it was interesting seeing her let go so much. I didn't picture her to be so vocal, but I loved it. lol Thank you again! HG4eva
I need to get better at drawing....I very much wanna make sketches of these ugh! Love this chapter. You guys are doing awesome!
MMMMMMMM YAAAAAASSSSS. This was good, this was very good. I approve whole heartedly. I feel bad for Neville... will we get to see him with anyone else?
Yummy yummy lemons :3
-MzPearlz