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for Lunaticus Book One: Half Moon

by JBankai89

person BAFan
schedule July 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Ch. 5

 

Not anticlimactic at all.  What a terrible situation for everyone.

 

~Debbie

person Anonymous
schedule July 14, 2016 at 12:00 AM

arrggg! Too short! I would have thought that Ginny would have left by now. After all she knows that there isn't really a choice. And she put herself in danger getting too close to Remus apparently.

person Anonymous
schedule July 12, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Ahhh... Ginny is saying goodbye isn't she? She is going to make it easier for Harry by leaving herself instead of making him have to tell her it's time to leave which he isn't able to do because he knows that will hurt her. Very respectful.

person Anonymous
schedule July 9, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Really liking this so far. Looking forward to seeing where this'll lead!
person Anonymous
schedule July 9, 2016 at 12:00 AM

excited to read more.  keep it up.

schedule July 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I am absolutely loving this, there's not enough RemusxHarry stories and much less good ones. I really enjoy your writing style and am debating whether I can handle waiting weekly for updates or just try and contain myself long enough to wait till it's finished so I can binge through it. I am really enjoying the concept and it's a nice twist on the usual 'mates' stories you find in this category. 

Eagerly awaiting an update :) Nina

person Anonymous
schedule July 5, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, I have never read a Harry and Remus story before but I cannot wait to see how the story unfolds. For once I kinda feel bad about Ginn but then like I said kinda.. lol please update soon
person Anonymous
schedule July 5, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Great start!  I'm so glad you're writing a HarryXRemus.  I love the complex relationship that builds from Remus being a werewolf.  Keep going, I can tell this is going to be a good one.

person Anonymous
schedule July 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Interesting start. I don't think I've read something quite like this. Don't know why this review page looks different but it doesn't have the place to put my name! Moodysavage here btw :)

person Anonymous
schedule June 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I like the story so far. I look forward to reading more soon