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for Lunaticus Book One: Half Moon

by JBankai89

person Janelle
schedule August 5, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Great chapter.  I'm glad Harry and Remus didn't fall into bed after their first kiss.  It's nice to see a story where things are being taken slow in order for a deeper connection to develop.  Remus is really earning Harry's trust by stopping when things are going too far for Harry. 

Love this story.

 

person sara101
schedule August 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Damn it Harry you're killing us! Lol can't wait to read what happens next ^.^

person Anonymous
schedule July 31, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I love your writing style and the way the chapter 's content is organized. This meeting was so cute . Man, that hate Vernon, who he thinks he is ? The idea of ​​spanking , regardless of the circumstance is so repugnant to me that I can only anger those people who practice this cowardly violence. Despite this unfortunate part , congratulations on fanfiction, she's wonderful.♥ 

person Anonymous
schedule July 28, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Really love this story ^^ Please update soon :-D
person Anonymous
schedule July 25, 2016 at 12:00 AM

While I love Harry/Remustove I think Remus owes Ginny an apology for this.  She is losing a lot.

person Anonymous
schedule July 24, 2016 at 12:00 AM

good god they both just need to let it go and go on cause that's that with them ...good one more please !!!!!!!

schedule July 22, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I just wanted to say that I absolutely adore your writing style (I'm also really enjoying the story, if course!). 

person Anonymous
schedule July 19, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Nie so far, but I really hope that lupin does not hurt harry ok...he hasdone so much for this to happen to him !!!!!!! hope all goes ok and slow with them.....thanks for this !!!! 

person Anonymous
schedule July 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Poor Ginny.  She deserves a happy ending too.  

person BAFan
schedule July 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Well, that's a twist on werewolf lore I've not seen before.  You're off to a rousing start!

 

 

~Debbie