This is some great writing you've got here. Well thought out story line and depth of characters is keeping your story moving, enticing, and invoking emotionally. I'll be watching for this story from now on.
love this story
I can't wait for more! I hope everything gets better on the home front for you!
I think you've done a good job of balancing Harry's fear of Remus after being attacked and Harry's love and want to be around him. Harry wants things to go back to normal yet he has a negative physical response to being too close to Remus right now; you highlighted that well by having Harry flinch and tense up as a knee-jerk reaction to Remus getting too close or sudden movements.
I'm excited to read more and see how Harry and Remus will cope with their damaged relationship. I'm about to re-read this story. I'm trying to recall whether or not Remus has said to Harry: "I love you." Because I have an inkling that Harry's (original) trouble with not being able to get too physically intimate with Remus is that Remus hasn't declared love and Harry want's both of them to be in-love. That's not to say that Harry doesn't know that Remus cares for him or loves him as James's son. I think Harry needs to know that Remus is in-love with him; that their platonic love has evolved into romantic love. I also don't think Harry knows that that is what he needs to hear.
All right, I'm off to re-read. Thank you for such an amazing story. You're a great writer.
This was good! I feel so torn for them both! I can't wait for more!
Ch. 12
I know Hermione means well, but she's too convinced of her own righteousness to admit that she may be wrong in this case. I hope she comes to her senses soon, but I'm afraid it may take something drastic happening to Harry for that to happen.
~Debbie
After chapter 5 -
I never thought I'd like this pairing sooo much! I love what you've done with them. I may have a new favorite!
How dare Hermione believe she knows what is best for Harry AND dismiss what his is saying - very typical reversion to know-it-all behaviour.
How dare she send Remus somewhere unknown. Are we sure she really is not with the anti-werewolf group.
AND especially how dare she take away Harry's right to leave a room with a door barrier. - I hope he gets really angry with her and lets her know this is not to be tolerated - get rid of her from his life completely as she has no right to make these decisions for him. Even Ginny was more mature and supportive of Harry than Hermione is being.
This behavious is reflective of Dumbledores 'for the greater good' speeches and boy were they annoying.
Update soon please.
Wow, amazing chapter. You are a tallented writer. Keep it up.
MOOOOORE feed my obssession lol awesome job LOVE LOVE it