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for Lunaticus Book One: Half Moon

by JBankai89

schedule December 11, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Aaahhhh!!! I hadn't been on here for a while and I saw you posted the sequel! I then realised I hadn't finished this story. It was really great to be able to read through it so quickly over the past few days so I'm glad I waited for you to finish posting. This is definitely one of the most well written stories I've ever read on this site. The way you make these characters your own but still keep their very core as accurate as possible, like Rons loyalty and Hermiones misguided ideals, they were definitely high lights of the story. So many authors on this site neglect the secondary characters but you had Ron and Hermione grow with Harry and his relationship and it really was a pleasure to read. I love your writing style, a perfect mix of humour, drama and passion, it's so captivating. I can't wait to explore more of your work and read the sequel to this story, 

Nina

person SeraAnderson
schedule October 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I am someone who has been reading off of this site for a good many years. Finding something that is well written is really hard. I am on fanfiction.net as a writer but never have written anything and put it on here. I have to say this story is enrapturing. I read through all 26 chapters in one day and look forward to continue reading the story. I was skeptical of the pairing when i had opened up the story but the more I read the more you pulled me in. Do you ever write originals? Hope you post the next chapter soon! If I can figure out how to save you as a favorite writer I most certainly will. 

person phoenix-rob
schedule September 29, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Loved the intensity between Remus, Moony and Harry.

Can't wait to see where you take the next part of this.

person anon
schedule September 26, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Wow, this is one of the best fanfics I've read.  Full of angst.  Love it.  Update asap!

person Nicole_Swift
schedule September 24, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Oh my god, Harry, NO! I hope Remus does not get in trouble for what was justified murder. 

person Lexi
schedule September 17, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Hi.

 

I just wanted to say, I just lovd your story.  Your descriptions of the bon that develops between Remus and Harry is excelent.  I especially enjoyed the way you wrote about all the different challenges they faced during the building of their relationship.  So much more refreshing than other harry potter is mate of some creature fics, where he finds out he's mated to someone and its pretty much, Yeah look, I'm mated so I might as well just accept it it without a fight.  That all feels a bit rushed to me, so great job.  Your portrayal of werewolf lore and culture as well as the character emotions was very well done.  Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more of your fics in the near future.

 

person sara101
schedule September 9, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Ugh I need more!! Lol I can't wait till the next chapter!

person Janelle
schedule September 9, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Yay, a physical progression of their relationship!  Excited to read more on this!  Great story.

person randomperson344
schedule September 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM

AMAZINGNESS!  Keep it up. Best RemusxHarry I think I've ever read!

person Nadie-D
schedule August 31, 2016 at 12:00 AM

When will the next chapter be out? Really enjoying the story