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WHY IS THIS A ONE SHOT???? WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

Yes yes yes two shot please!

Delicious tango and I would die for that footmassage ;-)

Oh, there's a new editor and no more names...anyway, hi again! That is just one more lovely story of yours and as I am always one for more to read, not to mention the unresolved part of UST - so there is definetely more to write about - I would say yes, please: Do write some more, this might be worth a few further chapters. These two dancing with your vivid and detailed descriptive language to express the whole scene was once again great to read. Thank you!

LeWyKi

Please continue! I love your stories and writing style. You put in the perfect amount of description to allow the reader to see your vision, while also allowing the reader to add their own elemants to complete the picture. That and the subtle (and not so subtle) humor you inject to your stories is refreshing. Plus I adore Snape/Hermione partnering, and you write them so well. 

Twoshot, please. Pleasepleasepleasepleaseplease!

Or threeshot.... fourshot?

More please !!! That was soooooo good! Do you know how to dance the tango? From reading this, I wish I did xD--MzPearlz

Sign me up for dance lessons with Snape! You're such a tease - this one was smoking hot. Like everyone else, I hope you'll continue this one! - dezzu

Dear lord! More, please, more!

You've been watching In Demand, haven't you?
I freaking loved the descriptions in this. The dancing was fucking fantabulous. 
"For some reason an inelegant grope and a gagging tongue down the throat were no longer appealing to her. In fact, they never had been."--Snort. So true.
"Even Draco’s jaw dropped like he’d just received a bludger to the balls."--Hahahaha.
(the only man who didn’t seem to show her any particular interest then, nor at any time throughout the evening, --not nor, just or.)
(He certainly wasn’t rude nor disrespectful--or disrespectful. Unless you want to change it to "He was neither rude nor disrespectful.")
(except for Minerva whom she’d promised to visit before taking her leave.--Comma after Minerva.)
inimitable--Yes! Word notebook
He approached slowly, his face changing with each measured step as the torchlight curved around his features. -- Excellent visual.
The final word was lifted on the curve of one of his expressive eyebrows-- Love this.
in the valley of his palm-- Valley made this excellent.
she felt another sensation leap into bed with the others-- I love the word choice here.
 She wondered if she could read him like this—the weaving and rolling of his muscles.-- Unh! Hell yes.
as she felt his breath roll down her neck.-- Double Unh!
It was a stick of dynamite in her—
“That’s it . . . right . . . there.” His silky purr proceeded to ignite the dynamite.--
clingy charmeuse should be pitched against his rough weave--
tangy with her frantic perspiration.-- Bahahahaha! This was word gold, and hilarious. And pitch-filled.
(Then, without warning he grabbed her and--comma after warning.)
(and his warm breath which now ghosted across her cleavage.--comma after breath.)
she might suddenly shatter into a pile of confetti.-- Great comparison.
it felt like he was in the throes of a whole of body erection.-- Mmmmmmm. Tasty.
(Sighing she stood and backed away from his lap.--comma after sighing.)
I don't think anybody's going to say, "Hmmmm, yes. Let's stop there. I'm good. Thanks." You're going to have a lot of angry clits on your hand (so to speak) if you don't resolve our sexual tension. Mine keeps requesting tango-sex now even though I keep telling her we have no partner and don't know how to tango at all. But she is insistent.

Please please please do a part two. This was so good!!! The tension between them was utterly amazing.