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by JBankai89

person sly.
schedule August 15, 2018 at 12:00 AM

The only problem I've got with this story is that you killed an unborn child willingly. I child starts the moment it is conceived. The rest of this story was great but I stopped reading it when it got to the second page warning. 

person Tk
schedule June 19, 2018 at 12:00 AM


 

person BadgeryFox
schedule December 17, 2017 at 12:00 AM

You are the first author I have read that mentions knotting during intercourse in humans/human form. I already found this concept very interesting while reading "Aftercare" (a delightfully pleasantly exciting story BTW) but now encountering this idea for the second time, I actually perceive it as kinda hot. Kinky lol ;) Due to owning dogs, one of which is male, I already knew of this anatomical trait, but thinking about it in context of these stories I perceive it as romantic - two lovers conjoined in such an intimate way. 

Thanks for your time! I am spending a very nice evening reading through some more of your stories after having spread the reading of "Lunaticus" over the last few days. Due to my immense enjoyment of your work, you have been on my mind a little each day. I'm very glad you excist, James. :) As I am quite content at the moment -curled up in bed with my partner and my two dogs with another wonderful story to read at hand- I sicerely try to send some of that luck to you and wish you also have a nice day. You deserve it!

Thank you!

person lizkrohn
schedule January 3, 2017 at 12:00 AM

be nice if you do a sequel where Harry does want to be preganant and all that follows. Interesting to see Mrs Weasleys reaction as she did want him and Ginny to marry. although to marry someone who looks like your mother is a bit creepy!

person Anonymous
schedule November 12, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Loved it!  Yes, please write a sequel as soon as you can.  Harry and Severus are my favorite couple with Harry/Draco next.  Then comes Harry/Daphne Greengrass.  More than you wanted to know but maybe you'll get some ideas for more stories.  Anyway I can't wait to read about Harry and Severus' baby/babies/children!!   They will be sooo smart, brave, full of beans and good humor but with with faces that can be so non-expressive or forbidding.  And the daughter(s) well...can you imagine trying to even talk much less date Severus' daughter no matter how beautiful?  He would make you disappear or incinarate you, turn you into a chair...who knows what.  With Harry's bravery/daring and Severus' controlling brillant brain they would be boss of the students in no time and any little Malfoys would be their bosum buddies!

schedule August 31, 2016 at 12:00 AM

That was good, though I wouldn't mind seeing more, perhaps of after the first heat and starting a relationship with his chosen Alpha.  kudos

person Anonymous
schedule July 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Really enjoyed it! Amazing job :D

person Anonymous
schedule June 24, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Very, very nice!
person autumngold
schedule June 22, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Incredible story! Thank you for having Severus take care of all of Harry's needs. It's good that his mate is so strong understanding. I'm so thankful that Severus chose him, so that he didn't end up with someone like Draco or Lockhart. Excellent story!