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for Devotion and Desire

by JBankai89

person ABC_123
schedule January 8, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Amazing! Well written and plot developed fully. Absolutely loved it!!!

schedule March 9, 2017 at 12:00 AM

This is such an amazing story- good work!

person delia cerrano
schedule September 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Liked it but I would have liked it even more if it had more interaction and/or discussions between people. 

person Anonymous
schedule August 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Interesting.  I'm not too sure what went on.  Not much explanation as to Rom and Hermione dead how and  why Voldie come and Harry got beat ect. 

schedule July 22, 2016 at 12:00 AM

This was one of the best Stockholm Syndrome stories I've read. No matter what, Harry's perceptions and emotional state were compromised when he "agreed" to bed Severus. He was not making that decision from a position of safety or personal power. It was coercion (via kindness) and psychological manipulation within the context of slavery and being a prisoner. It's sort of a classic technique in breaking a prisoner. Hopefully Severus will see to Harry's mind healing and recovery of some of his personality and ability to make his own choices. If he does that, I can see these two together for quite some time.

schedule June 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM
omggg!!! this was so amazingly perfect!!!!! i loved it!! please write more stories. :D:D
person Sara101
schedule June 14, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story. A wonderful job !!