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for Muggle Technology and Heroism

by Tommy-Lane

person Zm
schedule June 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I love you're writing, it's amazing and I'm excited to see where this is going to go.
person Kat
schedule June 5, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 2: More please?
person Anon
schedule June 5, 2016 at 12:00 AM
It drew me in in the first chapter. I want the updates to be more often, like every hour instead of week. How can Draco not know how Harry feels? He is kind of selfish. I don't think it's on purpose, but he does all this touching and couple stuff with Harry, but doesn't want him (well that we know of yet). I love both of them and how you are writing them.
person Rrose
schedule June 5, 2016 at 12:00 AM
What is harry going to do?? Draco seems into harry but his answer to harry's question at the pub seems fishy.
schedule June 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I'm really, really drawn in to your versions of the characters. I appreciate the depth and subtlety you've created, and I can imagine several possible ways those subtleties could play out. I hate that I have to wait to find out.
person azalea33
schedule June 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Very enjoyable story so far; you've set things up nicely. I'm looking forward to reading more!
person Lunar
schedule June 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I am reading this! I am almost kind of hoping on Harry trying to move on and Draco realising that he is unexplainably jealous, but perhaps that's too much of a cliche xD
person sparklewitch182
schedule June 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I am reading it and look forward to your weekly updates. it seems like draco is broken. I hope it isn't Ethan who can fix him.