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for Muggle Technology and Heroism

by Tommy-Lane

person Anonymous
schedule July 5, 2016 at 12:00 AM

This is my favorite story right now. Please update soon <3

 And a lot <3

person Anonymous
schedule July 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Hi,

I just wanted to say that I LOVE this story. I don't normally reviews stories here, but this one was well worth it.

I really like your writing style, the characters feel OC, and there isn't so much description that I want to skip ahead (like a lot of stories here).

Keep it up. I can't wait for the next chapters!

- Marie

person SP777
schedule June 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM
about #4... Did we really/ stop there? ....and how come Draco doesn't attracted to Harry, with all the arm holding & stuff he does??? What's Draco POV on this?
person Lunar
schedule June 21, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Yes, go Hermione's plan, go! Make that Draco jealous. That is what I was hoping for :3 Small grammar mistake I noticed: you wrote their right instead of they're right ;)
person streakerboi
schedule June 15, 2016 at 12:00 AM
reading and loving it... please keep going
person SP777
schedule June 14, 2016 at 12:00 AM
It's a delightful little story, has a few errors here & there, but not glaring.
person AnonymousTigress
schedule June 14, 2016 at 12:00 AM
OH whoo. Can't wait to see what the plan is. You know it's gonna be a good one if Hermione came up with it.
schedule June 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Hi! Just wanted to say that I am hooked!! Love your take on the characters and I can't wait to read more!!
person Queen of the Darkness
schedule June 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Intriguing story, beautifully painted. I look forward to reading more.
person Terese
schedule June 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Already intrigued by this story! Can't wait for more