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for Muggle Technology and Heroism

by Tommy-Lane

person Anonymous
schedule August 14, 2016 at 12:00 AM

SP777

about #8...

WHY do I have the feeling you're going to drop us into the cement....HARD......with the next cahpter?

person Hestia
schedule August 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Finally, it's been so for poor Harry hiding his love. I'm hoping Draco doesn't screw this up by leaving before Harry wakes up. I think Draco loves Harry, but he is more afraid of screwing things up and not having Harry in his life at all. This has so much emotion, you do an awesome job if making me feel. I look forward to your updates. 

person Sammy
schedule August 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I am loving this story so far! Can't wait to see what happens next!!! 😍😍😍

person Bb
schedule August 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Different take on Draco and Harry. Please keep writing. 

schedule August 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I always get so excited when the next chapter is up!!!!!  I love that Harry admitting to Draco how he felt was done in a sweet, nervous way instead of aggressively sexual. Not that I would have a problem with aggressively sexual :) just not for this part.  Can't wait for the next chapter.

person Anonymous
schedule August 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Please don't keep us hanging! Enough teasing, please show us what happens next! Completely hooked and always checking back for new chapters x

person Sephla
schedule August 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Nope! I'm still here and eagerly awaiting more awesome. 😉🙌😁

Can I say FINALLY! Loved this chapter. Gave me sooooo many different feels. 

person Billy
schedule August 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Ohh can't wait for you to write more! What a cliffhanger! My heart is beating so fast now! Wow!

person Anonymous
schedule August 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM

This story is amazing the way you write, is wonderful. The way Harry finally told Draco was exactly the way it needed. Please co tinge and don't make me wait too long 

person Anonymous
schedule August 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM

No, no, we're still here. Loving it, especially now that Harry finally said the words and the kiss finally happened. Can't wait to see what Draco does in response.