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for Deliver Me

by Aresgodofchaos

person Guess who
schedule January 15, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Merope and... and ALBUS???!!! OF ALL PEOPLE???!!! Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww XP

Haha yeah I know I'm throwing flames with a flame-thrower.... But other than that, I enjoyed this very much XD Oh wait, I'm a bit miffed at SevxTom (at first because... idk, I went through an eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww stage at the revelation of the Slytherin Consort) but seeing that they love each other I guess it couldn't be that bad.... maybe.... I just wish that Harry's life isn't so... cursed. I mean, isn't it sad enough that he went into azkaban and got dragon pox and got saved in time and now he's got people throwing themselves onto him just for name, fame and glory and such and he's been an orphan since one year old and has been abused and all that and now it's just sad that there are so many bad people around him--attracted to him, I should add. *sighh........ Soooooooooo when's the next update? *hopeful eyes

person Anonymous
schedule November 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM

You are still writing this I hope?  I'm into this and would hate to never know what happens!  Rorek sounds totally self centered and cruel or willing to be cruel.   Our sweet Harry besides being totally beautiful, brave and intelligent is learning the hard way not to take anything at face value...look behind the screens and dig deep into each person to know them inside and out before you even think about letting them into your very small trusted person circle.  I hope he sees RoRek as he really is and can protect himself.

person Lilybud
schedule September 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I am so happy for the update. Great chapter looking foreward to more

person Demonica
schedule September 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, I really do. But could you please redo chapter 12. It actually gave me a headache trying to understand it. And the descriptions on Rorek, you repeated a paragraph. This one had a lot of run ons and a severe lack of punctuations. Still, I'm really excited to see what happens next. Love " the candy sucking old fool"'s downright evil sister.
person BAFan
schedule September 5, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I'm a bit suprised that Harry included Bill and Charlie in his condemnation.  I thought that they had not taken part in anything?

 

~Debbie

person Anonymous
schedule July 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Frankly this is a page turner. I read it all in one sitting and am excited for more.
person ry
schedule June 14, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I have very much enjoyed this story thus far. I look forward to future updates.
person DinaTheCat
schedule May 28, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I just finished ch4 and I am loving this story so far! I think it's really well written, just the right amount of intrigue.
schedule May 28, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Enjoying the story, I look forward to reading more in the future :)
schedule May 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Wow I love this story but feel like I am going to need to start take to take notes. I hope Harry finds some love and support