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for Restoration of Magic

by Bickymonster

person Jan
schedule July 22, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Poor Harry, but least now he has his magic back, please update chapter 6 soon.

person Jan
schedule June 25, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Lol😂 poor Draco, and now he's going to traumatize Harry, please update chapter 5 soon 😁
person Kain
schedule June 22, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Well at least Alias and Itham are still completely comfortable on what was done but at least they seem to have a good relationship with Harry and the other children. So she doesn't want to part with Harry now that she has grown close to him but forgets that he is going to eventually have to be told the circumstances to his and the other children being brought to the city and there is no way to know how he will react to finding out he was stolen from his parents as were the other kids. wonder what 'plans' Ithum and Alias are referring to that seem separate from the councils? Nice to see the other teens and pairings and that was some cute and funny interaction. Wonder what the reason is for the Elders showing up early, maybe something to do with what might be going on in the Wizarding word? Curious if Lily is still a prisoner and whether Narcissa was able to get any info from Alice and how any revelations might have impacted the effected families.
person Kain
schedule June 22, 2016 at 12:00 AM
"Well at least Alias and Itham are still *not* comfortable"
person Kain
schedule June 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting start, curious to see whether or not the Fae's plans work or they end up making things worse. Also curious on how they went about selecting the children. Did it have to do with their families being well known or having influence in the wizarding world? Wonder what was done to Alice that she wasnt able to give an answer as to what she saw. Kinda funny how the Fae's plan is resulting in the beginning of enemies working together to get there kids back. Will be nice to see Harry and the other kids next chapter and how they are treated and adapt to their new environment and whether any of the taken children ever tried to rebel once they discovered the truth and what they are being used for.
person Jan
schedule May 26, 2016 at 12:00 AM
An Interesting story, with an interesting start, I can't wait for chapter 3 and more😁
person qwerty
schedule May 25, 2016 at 12:00 AM
very excited! keep writing