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for The Stag and The Snake

by JBankai89

person An addictive read!
schedule March 8, 2019 at 12:00 AM

I absolutely couldn't function without reading this story start to end! Beautifully played out and enjoyable till the end!

 

person BadgeryFox
schedule December 26, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I like how this story alternates fluently between moods ; it seems just the right mix of tension and fluff, action and contend company, sadness and humor that keeps me reading effortlessly. Havin' a fabulous time here devouring this fic :)

Thank you for writing!

person Anonymous
schedule July 9, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Holy cow! This was amazing! I just read the whole thing (as quickly as I could between a fulltime job and two kids, and then being on vacation with no internet for a week) and just.. Wow! It was an emotional rollercoaster ride and at times it was physically difficult to put my phone down to actually do the things I was supposed to do. Very well written and very exciting, with just enough sappy romance to keep me happy. The lemons were just the cherry on top.Absolutely amazing!
person Anonymous
schedule July 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM

What a great piece of work! 

person Hestia
schedule June 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I just finished. I really liked it. At first I was mad that Harry had been kidnapped, but you did a good job so I forgave you. I would've liked more of Draco's developing feelings because it felt like one minute he hated Harry and the next minute he loved him. Overall I really enjoyed your story. I'm looking forward to more of your work.
person djaddict
schedule June 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Good story, I enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.
person djaddict
schedule May 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM
This was a good read. I was a little apprehensive at first but once they really saw each othrr, their relationship was awesome. Harry's ordeal was horrible but well written. All these chapters posted at once was quite the treat.
schedule May 22, 2016 at 12:00 AM

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person Magykrider
schedule May 20, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I love the Swan Princess twist to the story.
person sera21
schedule May 20, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Wait, if he was 1 year old when he came to the Dursleys and it was 5 years later...wouldnt he be 6 years old and not 5? 5+1=6?