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Wwhhhooo getting interesting...

so to be honest i wouldnt mind seeing hermione getting pregnant maybe her older sister also let harry get started on rebuilding the potter family.

i dont how many times i read this since the start of the summer, it is soooo god!! please keep updates! its getting so good!this is like my 20th time reding since Summer vacation began

I think you should consider having Julie secretly record everything on Jane's handy and some polyjuice fun (Hermione brewed it once so she could do it again or has some stashed). Jane could be an interesting in magic and a voyer, who brews potions with Her daughters' help or she could drink a potion by mistake, turn into Hermione and use the situation to pouch Harry. Anyway, it would be good if all of the Grangers were well read and knew much about what's magic capable of. At this point you could easily go for mother-daughters conspiration to have as much fun with magic as is possible.

Nice flow and excellent story telling.

Excellent work on your story,really enjoyed it.hope more posts soon

Nice fic, but it would have been better if there was some sort of competition between Hermione, her sister and their mother over Harry. They could also experient with some (confundus, lust, anti conceptive) potions and create a big enough mess to involve auror cadet Tonks. Imagine a party getting out of hand -Granger females could invite their female friends and a few of them could break some vials filled with potions. That way the Granger females plus Harry would be forced to do some demage control and combine forces to somehow convert Tonks to their side in order to avoid Azkaban. What your story lacks is problems. Perhaps if you could add some sex based rituals into the plot and more experiments - f.e. Harry could come up with the idea to learn metamorphomagus magic. To do that he could use polyjuice potions with Tonks' hair as an ingredient. I mean that magic is every girls dream. What could one do when polyjuiced as metamorphomagus - learn. The knowledge could stay even after the potion runs out. That would give you three metamorphomagi - Harry, Hermione and Tonks, but if you add something like "liquid magic" potion, then you could also add Hermione's sis and mum as That potion could work like magical battery for them. The experiments would also give the plot some purpose. Hermione could find the girl who hurt her and pay her back. Harry could invite her on a date, spike her drink, then they could make a very degrading movie with said girl and her relatives. It could be a step to open relationship for the elder Grangers as Mr. Granger could be very interested in their female slaves and his wife could from then on openly shagg with Harry and the girls. Tonks could illegaly remove the trace form Harry's and Hermione's wands or give them replacements from the black market. They could practice their metamorphomagus powers by impersonificating other people, f.e. Harry could morph to look like Ted Tonks, learn to act like him (thanks to Nym's memories) and shagg unsuspecting Andromeda. The goal could be to claim the Black fortune and screw over some bad DEs - that idea could emerge in a few chapters f.e. when Hermione's sister gets abducted in Death Eater raid. Harry could be very fortunate to buy her in an auction in the Knocturn Alley. She could by then be trained to answear only to "pet", which could be the reason to start experiment with potions. What you wrote has a potential - very nice story, but the chapters could be slighty longer (f.e. around 4k words) as it would be easier to read. These are just suggestions, feel free to use any ideas you like, so no pressure.

I also toy with the idea for having Harry and the Grangers capture and imprision in the cellar Bellatrix Lestrange. They could aim to set her right by any means necessary (perhaps Tonks could help with that). You could add Narcissa and it would be even more interesting. I think it would work in your story. The other idea would be a summer visit from Madam Pince. She could bring more books for Hermione and get more than she expected in return. Forbidden knowledge could be a start for sex based rituals - just give them some purpose. Hmm, a trip to the cinema could also be interesting.

Great Story,Can't wait to see what happens next.

Please keep this story going, it's bloody amazing.