Please continue ASAP, you've literally left off on a cliffhanger
I'm trying to ignore the spelling and grammar errors, as there really aren't that many, but it's getting difficult. I got to the part where Hermione whipped the shaving cream, instead of wiping it, and I couldn't finish the chapter without writing this review. I don't know if you have a beta reader or not. If you do, you need a better one (or to listen to the one you have), and if you don't have one, you need to get one.
I also didn't like your statement last chapter regarding female masturbation being all about the vagina. Uh, no. This statement isn't completely wrong, but is incredibly inaccurate. It really depends on the woman. Yes, some women require more vaginal stimulation, while others, like myself, rely almost solely on clitoral. Please don't make general statements about women without doing a bit of research first.
A really great story and very well written. SISTERS, exciting.
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Further to my review, please inform me of updates.
I just caught this story here and I have to say I find it quite hot. I'm definitely looking forward to further chapters and seeing what else they can get into.
Loving the story. Can't wait to see where you go from here.
LOVE! more please!
This was a great read. I just wish it didn't stop so abruptly. Hopefully you finish your writing about the growing relationship between Harry, Hermione, and her sister.
please update soon I love your story