rate_review Reviews

I loved this saucy little story. I realized towards the end that I've read it before. Well worth the re-read!

I loved it very much. Thank you.

This was exceptionally well-written. Not the sexual parts so much as the descriptions and nuances of the characters. Those parts were my favorite. Like the "most charming smile" and "reformed" Lucius Malfoy. And how he almost spit out his wine. Excellent.

My Dear Oracle, 

This story is so different from all the other ones, I had pleaseure to read from you. Severus and Lucius' interactions are so funny. Oracle, I believe only you can come up with such delicious, hot and laugh-wringing dialogues.  

I loved how the story started, progressed and ended -the twist being an absolute cherry on the top! I'm totally sated -it was a perfection.  I honestly wish, I could execute my fantasies with such a straight face -that's the level of perversion I'm aiming at!

There is a lot of favorite moments and sentences, for example: "Age improves flavor"??? HA! If only... trust me I've tried!

And all the talk about "weather" -so funny.  And at last I know, what Lord Malfoy does as a job (apart from being a Lord, but obviously not a gentleman) -he's a professional undresser! He must be very good at it...mmmm

Another one: "tits pointing to heaven" and then "praying for an orgasm" -that's what I do too -hahahaha. Ohh my god...

For a someone, who doesn't make any money from all this writing, you are taking it to a painfully professional standard. I'm grateful -it reads wonderfully and with pleasure, in all it's wet glory.

Thank you so much, I'll be waiting for your next chapter story. Please hurry.

Your Fox xx

P.S.

Did I tell you I love you?

I do. xx

This was the best! One of my favorite authors writing my favorite 3 some. i love the way you write dialog, and the banter between them did not disappoint. Humor and heat, I'm one happy girl right now. Thank you :)

I really enjoyed this one. It felt very well rounded and, ultimately, satisfying. I like the companionable, slightly pompous exchange between Lucius and Severus early, it feels very authentic and more amicable than we are used to which was pleasing. ‘What kind of wizard fucks a witch before dessert's been served?’ – A nice insight into Lucius’ ironic etiquette of debauchery. ‘They follow her around like a pack of priapic puppies.’ – Nice. Alliteration off! I love the collusion between these two, especially the fact that the collusion turns out to be a totally different dynamic. ‘He gave Lucius a look over her head and gestured at her skirt. See what I mean?’ The chapter names were hilarious, loved them. ‘Even Draco knows you should wait until she's on the edge of orgasm before suggesting anything kinky."’ – Hahahah. So at odds with TMG ;) ‘"I'm an angel," Malfoy said with an evil smile.’ – I liked this visual. I really liked the book exchange where Hermione and Severus are discussing options and Lucius is out in the cold. Neither is willing to articulate out loud but they reach an understanding. ‘"Quite. But take my advice, age improves flavor.’ – Hahah, smarmy but hot. ‘close enough to smell her cleavage’ – mmmmm, sweaty cleavage ;) ‘His dick raised its hand and volunteered the unnecessary reminder that garter belts left him harder than a Beater's bat.’ – Awesome! ‘indecorous’ – noice! The part where all of life’s woes pale into significance as he revels in the spanking is hilarious and touching. ‘I want to make sure your spokespussy is accurately representing your needs’ – hahah, everyone needs a spokespussy  ‘As if his cock wasn’t already on the brink of snapping itself in two on the jagged lathe of his zip.’ – Another cracking sentence. ‘Her eyes darted between the two of them as if she was afraid one of them might suddenly become naked when she wasn't looking.’ – This is desperately sweet and funny. I like the word ‘canted’ by the way, I might have to use it to change up ‘pitched’. ‘trying to circumcise him with pleasure’ – it’s a fine line between pleasure and pain  ‘“I, however, am not a gentleman. Draco's going to have a fit.”’ - *snort* The twist was lovely. I’m not there with TMG yet so a bit of long-term satisfying loveliness is welcome. ‘“More wine?”’ – Nice ending. Like I said before, I’m not particularly interested in anyone beyond SS/HG unless they are written really well. You’ve done it again here. Well done.

I came upon this while moderating, and had to come back to leave a review. It's not often I stop to read for pleasure, but this story certainly caught my attention. I enjoyed reading very much, even though it's not my usual fare. But then, I do find it difficult to resist Snape and Lucius together. Very, very well done. And well written. Loved the twist at the end. :)

This story is a really fun read. I liked the interplay between Hermione and Severus, and the actually smut between these two is rather hot. My two issues with the story are minor. First the ending when you find out the real relationship between Severus and Hermione doesn't really seem to go with the rest of the story. Second is that it feels like you've forgotten about Lucius through a lot of the story.

Absolutely delightful tidbit. Your work is always exciting and sexy while Managing to remain well written and intelligent.

Severus and Hermione not really my cup of tea, but you write it so deliciously... Some more but with Draco and Lucius included please, a foursome?