AFF Fiction Portal
schedule April 14, 2016 at 12:00 AM
It's getting so good. I really like that you took Hermione away from that goody-goody persona. You are also writing the Avengers really well. But I love love love that you still have Hermione teaching Jarvis mid argument.
person Skybee
schedule April 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM
That was kind of funny, maybe if she gasped then she would seem like he was doing itlol. Love the story!
person Anon
schedule April 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM
This is really interesting so far! I can't wait to read the rest.
person Skybee
schedule April 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this.
person John
schedule April 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting read! I enjoyed this story. Nice touch with having the feud between Hermione and Tony Stark. When will Tony realize that he has feelings towards Hermione? The way you had Hermione start to teach Vision about how to interact with humans is brilliant. Good job on giving Vision a boner on the morning after and how the avengers volunteered Captain America to give Vision the "talk". I hope to see more updates soon. Give me a heads up when you upload a new chapter. Well done
person Anon
schedule April 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying your story so far. Curious to see where it goes!
person Skybee
schedule April 5, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far, can't wait for your next update.