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Is there a next one?? All these amazing stories with cliff hanger endings are making me crazy. Ahh! Love the idea of hermione and jarvis that was just amazing. I laughed so hard during this story epically with the child like innocence of jarvis

Wow, what an exciting story! That last action scene was intense. I'm not a fan of Ron so I'm not sad about his demise nor of any of the other rogue wizards who attacked them. I love the relationship between Hermione and Jarvis. I am not as familiar as I could be with the Avenger world, but I know enough to be able to envision all the characters and settings. Loki as a lonely guy was intriguing. Are we right to trust that he won't beguile and mislead Luna? So much left to explore in all these characters and relationships. Thanks for this really good, believable crossover story.

Mrthinks you lie... hahahahaha love it!!!

So this is a great story, how do I follow it so that I know it's been updated? Also is it on any other sites like Archive of our own or on fanfiction?

So totally disregard that beginning about the misquote. That was meant for another story. Last time I try writing two reviews simultaneously. :)

I kind of want her to be with both of them, does that make me selfish? Lol

Oh yes I agree that having them both fight over Hermione is much more fun! Okay so first of all, I didn't mean to quote wrong but damn autocorrect had other ideas. I read and review off of my kindle and the viewing window when reviewing is 3/4 of an inch. Sometimes I catch the mistakes...Sometimes not so much. :) Anyways... I was super excited about this chapter. Hermione was being just a bit petulant there in the beginning but I LOVED how Luna set her straight. I love how she tells her that she will never be normal since shewas never normal to begin with.Luna's war experience sure did put Hermione's experience to shame. She so had it worse. I am a little confused. If Thor thought that his brother was dead and mourned for him, why is Loki ruling over Thor's homeland with out his knowledge? Doesn't Thor ever go home? No one tell him? I mean didn't his friend JUST visit? Also not to be knit picky...but you really need a preposition like 'at'in the paragraph where everyone looks AT her in resignation.

Okay so I have to admit I passed over on this story a few times simply because I don't like crossovers. I think its the OCD in me, in like every thing in its place. I don't like to mix my fandom, I'm just weird like that. But then I realized that you were the author and since I do like your work, I thought that I'd give it a try. I LOVE IT! Heroines is so broken. But yet so vindictive. I mean she jacked him off for information. That's BRILLIANT! I like that she's paired with Jarvis. I can't wait for them all to go to Asguard. I want the DA and the Avengers all up in the mix. It's going to be Epic. I can't wait.

Oh man, Iwas hoping she would go all crazy smart witch lady and blitz his butt. But maybe a rival for Vision. Bring on the crazy jelousy...

I wouldn't mind seeing her with Loki, maybe make her a little bit bad..