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Nice chapter! I really like it that your chapters are long! Please keep up your great work. I'm wondering, will Harry be Severus' biological son? I'm wondering what James did to repay him back. And the only thing that I can think about is to "protect" Severus son. And the next question is...shouldn't Remus sense that something is wrong with Harry? Werewolves Can much better smell than any human and they are the only and real Enemy of vampires. So he should be able to sense that something is wrong with Harry right? And my last question is, I thought that Harry's body temperature sank really low, so he should be really cold. Doesn't hermione feel it when she hugged Harry? Okay that is all I have to say about chapter 8. I hope you will update soon and we will read some Lucius/ Harry moments and also some Harry/Severus father/son moments. Keep up your work! Love

please please add more soon i cant wait too read more and i cheak everyday too see if has more....

Thank you for your incredible update! My heart breaks for both Lucius and Harry. Hopefully Lucius has had an easier time with the Dark Lord than his family. Harry needs to stop being so nice to Ginny. She is never going to get the hint that he isn't interested if he keeps being so polite to her. Obviously Ginny won't accept that Harry isn't interested in her, she wants her rich hero. It's too bad that she is too stubborn to accept what everyone is trying to tell her. Fabulous new chapter of your wonderful story! Can't wait for more!

wonderful please please add more!!!!!!!

Outstanding new chapter! Thank you for having Lucius take such good care of Harry. For the first time in his life, Harry is having someone who actually cares for him and puts him first. Hopefully soon Harry will realize who his true friends and family are, and I just hope that Severus will be able to do the same. Wonderful update! Can't wait to see what will happen next!

I Love your story! Excellent plot. Can pureblood vampires get pregnant? That would be awesome!!! Love that Nagini will be on Harry's side. I'm interested how this story will be later Lucius/Harry/Draco because I thought Draco died. So I'm really curious right now! Please update soon!

more more more!!!!!

Your story is incredible! Thank you for giving Harry such a strong protector! I'm so glad that Harry will no longer have to die for Dumbledore's "Greater Good". Excellent story! Can't wait to see what will happen next!

Ch. 1 Interesting idea - I'm intrigued. One quibble: //Only now did he realize, that the tips of his hair only reached the aristocrat’s elbows, he was only five feet tall after all, whilst the noble man looked more like 6,4.// I know you want to emphasize the difference in their heights, but this doesn't seem right. If the tips of Harry's hair - which from canon descriptions sticks up at least an inch high on his head - only reaches Lucius's elbow, either Harry is much less than 5' tall or Lucius is considerably taller than 6'4". That's a difference of sixteen inches, which measured upward from Lucius's elbows would be maybe mouth-high on him, leaving about six inches to reach the top of his head. Granted, I'm measuring on myself with only a ruler so these are rough estimations, but still your description doesn't make sense to me. Lucius is not a giant and Harry, although small for his age, isn't that short. Another quibble, this one regarding the tether that Harry tied between them when they went to bed. There was no magic involved in it, so what was to stop Lucius from untying it while Harry slept? You have an interesting idea here, as I said, but the story could really benefit by having a beta. There are several errors, including Private Drive instead of Privet and relieve instead of relief, among others. Also, long paragraphs are difficult to read, especially during conversations where more than one person is speaking. My comments are intended as constructive criticism intended to help you, so I hope I haven't given offense. ~Debbie

please add more soon :)