Get update! I love Harry's new familiar.
Personally I think, with the way he has been seen so far, that adding him into the mix would be a bad idea. So I vote no.
Lucius was bound to the house not Harry Potter. Taking Lucius out of the blood wards of the house should allow Lucius to escape and do whatever he wants. If he was bound to Harry then the same should be for Nagini and she should feel the same pull as Lucius. It doesn't make sense. Harry should have went to the store alone. (chap1)
I love your story so far. However I hope the question you asked at the end of a 4some was about a different story becuase it does not fit at all to have voldemort be in their relationship based on how you written his character.. and i though draco was dead? however i would not be apposed to the pairing in a different story =)
Wow how is lucius going to handle that he mated a 12 year old? Snape and harry are going to love the look on his face though when instead of harry marrying up malfoy did. I wonder how Black is going handle this but this will help with Voldemort though. love the story
Dumbledore is so lucky that Harry is such a forgiving person. After the horrible childhood he had, to find that Dumbledore made him actually believe he was older than his age. Hopefully this won't change Lucius' opinion of him. Honestly, if I was Lucius, I would feel sick knowing that my mate was a twelve year old. Poor man! Fabulous new chapter! Thank you for this incredible story! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
A somewhat constructive criticism first, there are quite a number of spelling and grammar mistakes that at times make its difficult to understand what is being said. Also there are a couple of points such as sirius and remus being referred to as harry's guardians or sirius referring to harry as his nephew which are not explained. That being said I love the plot and the feel of the story, I think that the characters fit and that the general tone of the story makes sense, I look forward to reading more!!!!!
OMG I just found this story and I am loving it!! You are doing such an amazing job. Can't wait to read more :)
What I thought the reading was going to be was not but man so I like it !!!!! can't wait for more !!!!!!!really good
Excellent new chapter! Poor Harry, Hermione and Ron are very noisy and never give Harry any space. They also try not to let him keep any secrets. Thank goodness he has Lucius to keep him safe and happy. I just hope that he still will be able to smell Lucius on his shirt after he cried on it. Hopefully soon Harry and Lucius will be together again. Thank you for your outstanding new chapter! Can't wait for Lucius and Harry to be together again!
