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April 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 1
Well, I have to say that this is different! Draco being the one to extend the olive branch is definitely not the norm in HP fanfiction. I'm intrigued, especially as it seems that Draco might help Harry to circumvent Umbitch's sadism.
"That evil hag! What on earth…"
Not sure what the weird characters at the end of this sentence are, but I noticed it at least once more. Just FYI.
~Debbie
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April 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM
A very promising start, and Harry getting poked in the eye by an overenthusiastic Malfoy made me bark out a laugh! Can't wait for the next part!