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for Memories of Deception

by professorflo

person Lissa
schedule June 4, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Chapter One:
Oof. Well, you've certainly grabbed my attention immediately.

person Lissa
schedule June 4, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 2:

Bloody hell. I can't promise to review after I read every chapter, but this is great so far!

person Lissa
schedule June 4, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 8:

This is bloody brilliant. I'm still completely sucked in.

person Lissa
schedule June 4, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 11

You are brilliant at writing Voldemort and a dark Snape. I have feeling I'm not going to get much sleep tonight...

schedule June 3, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Hello,

I just want you to know that I love your story!! 

The plot is such a great piece of work. And I can't imagine how many hours you spent to think about the thousands of connections you make in every chapter. I'm so excited to read the next chapters. 

The characerisations are believable and likeable and the development of Hermione is very well done. It has to be hard for you to have the knowledge about everything that happend but to write from the point of the 'fresh obliviated' Hermione, who does not remember anything. 

I hope Snape found a way to complete his potion against Nagini and that he found a way to survive, and ... ...

Yes, I hope for a Happily After Ever After! 

I repeat myself: I am so excited to read the next chapter(s) 

I'm sorry for any grammar of language mistakes. I'm from Germany and I better read English than write it by myself.

I hope your next update comes soon.

Greetings! LittleStranger

 

 

schedule May 16, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Update i found this story and read  through all 91 chapters i need to have something to hold on too and also some  sweet loving action !! Amazing read love twists and turns!!

person Rhiannon
schedule February 12, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Thank you, thank you!

I look forward to reading the remaining chapters once they are completed. (And I am not above pleading that it is sooner rather than later...in a Hermione high on lust potion type if way :-)

 

person Rhiannon
schedule February 8, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I just wanted to send you a note to tell you how much I have enjoyed your story. Severus Snape is one of my favorite Harry Potter characters and I feel that you have captured him beautifully. The way you initially introduce Snape, so that the reader believes him to be evil and gradually draw out that he is really not the villain you initially believed him to be is very JKRowling'esque. I am especially fond of the scene where he compels Hermione to target Lucius with the Cruciatis curse, as well as the bathtub scene where she nurses Snape back to health. I hope every much that you are able to complete your story (as I would be very disappointed if he or Hermione did not get to use the anit-venom he created to save him!) Again, thank you for all of your hard work and for giving me some much apprecaited entertainment over the past few days.

person Djomar
schedule February 2, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Truly amazing story. Hope you willhave updatehave soon

person Djomar
schedule February 2, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Snape will survive right? Did he finish the potion?