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for Memories of Deception

by professorflo

person Jces999
schedule June 3, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Finally got to the end of this story (Severus proposing ) and have loved it - everytime I’d worked out where the story was going, it’d take a twist - excellent. However, I’m confused by the chapter at the end of the Epilogue - it doesn’t seem to fit, and seems to belong to another story about an introduced Marriage Law. Is it meant to be there ?? 

person Jces999
schedule June 2, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Hi, just got to page 79/79 - please tell me you are going to continue with this - it’s brilliant!! Great writing & building beautifully ! 

schedule September 4, 2017 at 12:00 AM

What a wonderful story. I'm a fan of your new one. 16 months! That's dedication. 

schedule August 11, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I am seriously in love with this story! I know you probably don't get enough reviews on it, but damn! Keep going! This is so good I can't put it down.

schedule July 12, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Ah Harry you've come to ruin a sweet moment I see. 

schedule July 11, 2017 at 12:00 AM

You really are killing me!

schedule July 9, 2017 at 12:00 AM

You are breaking my heart. You paint a picture that gives you all the colors and more....thank you

schedule July 5, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Must you always leave me hanging!!!! This is one of my favorite reads and I assure you I've read a lot! 

schedule June 20, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Ooohhhhhhh. Let them be loved!!!

schedule June 9, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Wow shocker!!!, bet  she didnt see that coming. Cant wait for more. Poor snape the things he goes through, his emotions and moral sense must be totally all over the place. I truely love the man, very sweet underneath all his cover