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I love it so far. Wouldn't mind seeing an entr that's a flashback to the first time he broke Lily. Also maybe Lily accidentally slips her son a gender transformation potion that's not only permenant but made using some of Dudley's cum thus tying Harriet to him.. Jsut a thought. 

Hey, this is great!  

 

While I'm not a fan of cucking, I really enjoyed reading this and how alpha Dudley is!  I find the new universe you've crafted intriguing and I desperately want more.  I don't have any particular qualms about the girls/women you plan to use, but, at the risk of being cliche, my favorites would be Hermione and Ginny.  However, this is because these are two of the most important girls in the world to Harry and Dudley actually taking them for his own would be actually cucking Harry.  Anyways, I really enjoyed reading your story and I hope you write lots, lots more!

Fucking hot!

Interesting story, but I think Duddley&Vernon should capitalize on Harry swearing an oath to obey them. It could've been a terrible mistake or the Dursleys could've read a magical book and fuck Potter as a result. That way Harry could be ordered to woo any girl they desire and all of his girls will become their slaves. Harry could really love his girls and be loved back. Hmm, you could have Dudley and possibly Vernon polyjuice as Harry to shagg his women. Imagine the surprise when the potion wears of and the girl is bound to the bed. The only one you should spend more time on is Tonks - she should be somehow persuaded to morph to Duddley's every whim. Don't know, but perhaps he could give her some druggs to help with that. Third option could be to switch Harry's and Duddley's places - Harry could think it a good idea to spice things in the bedroom to polyjuice as Dudders who could find out and use the situation to his advantage. The girls could be tricked and play along to punish Harry's stupidity. Just some thoughts.

Good start, hope this will be updated some time :)

That is a really good story could you add hermione cuckolding Harry and add vernom as the bull and humiliate Harry snapp his wand make Harry their house elf that like in this challenge http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/index.php/topic/60634-vernom-and-dudley-dursley-fuck-and-impregnate-harrys-girlfriends/

how about Hermione and ginny

i cant wait to see the next chapter have harry watch Dudley get his mom pregnant http://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/2062111-cuckold-crossover http://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/2056318-Harry-potter-cuckold-world

Never been a fan of Dudley to be honest. Writing is pretty good but I wish it were Harry POV, although I guess you did say you're bored of them. Now that I think of it I've never read a Harry cucks James story though.

What about a chapter where Dudley makes Harry into his slut? Personally I prefer m\m but you could also do something where Harry or one of the girls Dudley has turns Harry female