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Whoa! So many updates! ! I'm so excited! Shaun..that...mannn.... stuff got really real... but YAAAY HE'S ALIVE. I can't help but still feel sorry for him. ..but I'm so glad Severus is okay now! I'm unsure on how this will end even tho I never want them to end but. . All is well! I'll be looking for the next chapter! (If there's one? Please be one :D)

OMG! You really know how to work twists Poor Shaun - and Luna ofc. I hope that this helps her get better. Knowing the why - or rather lack thereof - and the how. And thank you for making Snape this strong and capable. No more onions, please ;-)

Oh my goodness! Of course, of course, the perfect wrap-up to one mystery. I love how powerful Snape is. He really saved the day from what could have been a senseless tragedy. Even though his crime was terrible, there has been so much healing. I LOVED the piano sex and the subsequent by-play alluding to more. Chopsticks, indeed!

Oh, god, whaaat? That´s so sad! Did Luna know?

Shut up! Stop doing that! My heart and my kindle can't take it. Thanks to you and that beautiful gut wrenching little twist at the end, I dropped my kindle. That was AWESOME! I loved how the keys weren't working. That description of being tied down to the piano was oh so hot and inventive. I don't think that I've EVER heard or read of that before. Oh so hot. I love the camaraderie that everyone in this little group has. It seems so special. But seriously woman. Nothing prepared me for the end. Shauns confession nearly broke my heart (and my kindle). That was creepy yet so beautiful. I mean he was her stalker. I hope they get pass this. But when Snape lifts him up and into his arms and carries him down the mountain I almost wept. That was beautiful. Oh my god. I CANNOT wait for more.

"Let's just call it a draw’ – this was so pythonesque it made me laugh (is this the ‘black knight’ scene from the Holy Grail?)"—I haven't watched that in so long. You've put me in the mood to gallop around the house like I'm on a horse. "extra curricular fun’ – I hope it was a successful endeavour ;)"—It was several successful endeavors. :) Love the start of this chapter. George, you rapscallion you :) And now we know what he's been doing with Luna. Yay. (BTW, Grammarist says it's "to a T". Who knew? I've never seen it written down before.) And yay, it's time for the race. But first we have Snape's pornographic piano comments. Bwhahahaha! That was great. Dennis's lines about the keys sticking were hilarious. I definitely need to be chopstick-ed to orgasm (but there's no way I'd fit in an upright piano...at least not with legs spread.) I would like to sit/lay on a piano while it's being played. Possibly naked. Okay, definitely naked. ("Let’s hit the trail you lot,”—Comma between trail and you.) "But when you're hot, you're hot."—Bwhahahaha! Burn victim humor is so hard to come by. And I love Hermione's truncated gait revelation. Poignant hilarity. (adding a gilt edge to the landscape.—Great visual.) I enjoyed the walk up the mountain. The patients are all a who's who of Snape's help. It's good to see Pomona getting better. I'm curious what Ellory and Lynch were talking about and why Ellory has been more reserved. I have absolutely no guesses about what's going on there. And Luna finishes the race in a tie. Clever girl. And then she thanks everyone. Especially Snape. This must be meaningful to him, but I can't help wondering exactly what he's thinking. And then we have Shaun's bombshell. Holy fuck. As soon as he stood up and started explaining his problems, I was like "Oh shit. It's someone at the retreat." At first I thought it was going to be Hermione or something, but then he said sweet and gentle and I caught on. And he started the fire. I thought Luna's candle explanation was a bit bland (but believable). But this is massive. Obviously Shaun thought so too. His self imposed cruciatus pain is understandable now. (And this makes their dual views on peeping more poignant.) I'm curious if Luna knew about Shaun before the confession. And Snape saves the day yet again. (Jesus, Shaun killing himself would have seriously fucked everybody up—especially Luna.) And we part the scene with Starfish boy and another of his rescues. Excellent. With everything Snape's been through, he probably saw that coming (and I assume he knew Shaun's backstory the whole time). Things are slowly becoming clearer. Seems like we're building up to something big with Snape. I hope Luna can reassure Shaun enough for him to heal. So many possibilities. Can't wait for the next chapter

What an incredible chapter. From laugh to sex to Hermiones confession. It concerns me and leves me breathless.

I'm a bit sorry for Snape. Hermione just kissed him and a bit later she felt from sky in Lynchs coat. I think, he crossed the line between professionality (it's twistet anyway, because he should be the patient) and personal affection for Hermione a while longer. And now that. Poor Snape,Ormond human and vulnerable beneath his distanced appearance.

Imagine Dennis sitting there at the piano asking Snape to teach him the piece he played. "And those discords. They were somehow beautiful. How did you manage that?" And he would probably smell it, too, but wouldn't be able to identify the smell, poor boy. He'd mention it to Snape and he'd say "the smell of hard work and joy you give."

Omg! Best performance ever! I'd give it a 'hand'... lol. That was awesome. That was so hot and they hadn't even had sex. I love how just before she's about to come, she thinks about how it's going to mess up the piano then goes, Oh too late. Love it. I can't wait for the next one.