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for In Their Hands *Complete*

by Desert_Sea

person Anonymous
schedule July 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM
since when is SNAPE a sex therapist to know what Sarah needed??? 
person Anonymous
schedule July 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM

when why is SNAPE there as a patient for sex therapy ?? why is hermione the doctor and NOT snape the doctor??      “Because I’m not like you.”

“What?” Hermione almost choked, taking a step toward him.

“I have a wealth of sexual experience to draw from,” he said.

“And how do you know I don’t?” Hermione could feel the flush rolling across her skin like a fever.

“You sent Calder and Jaeger away. You didn’t understand them. You might be sympathetic toward your clients but you can’t be empathetic. Not completely. Because you have absolutely no idea what it feels like to be them.”

person Anonymous
schedule July 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM
snape is doing hermione job for hermione with his sex therepy on sarah !!!!!!!! 
person Anonymous
schedule July 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM
shouldnt they use silenting spells i mean if hermione is going to be vocal during sex with snape?? 
person Anonymous
schedule July 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM

why did she automatically think obsession after he said it was more than just a crush? thats unfair, i mean it could be love? why judge so quickly and think obsession straight away?? 

Hermione frowned inwardly. An oblique admission.

“Why wouldn’t they have known?”

“Because I didn’t tell them.”

“A crush?”

“Sort of. Probably more than that.”

An obsession. But she didn’t want a word like that out in the open just yet.

person Anonymous
schedule July 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM
does Mr Mollison have a crush (an obsession etc on) a young child? is he a pedophile and thats why he feels so gulity for he actions?? 
person Anonymous
schedule July 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM
WAIT A MINUTE EMILY IS LUNA LOVEWOOD?? 

“What are you fucking doing!” she growled, drawing her hand back and hitting him as hard as she could across the face.

He didn’t respond, simply staring at her, his pale cheek blooming red.

“Answer me!” She drew her hand back again.

“Stop. Don’t!” Emily wheezed.

Hermione turned to see tears trickling down the chaotic rivulets of her cheeks.

“He’s been helping me.”

“Yeah, he’s good at that,” Hermione sneered.

“I’m sorry. I should have told you before,” the woman sobbed.

“Fuck,” Hermione hissed, putting her hands on her hips and staring at the ground.

“It’s me, Hermione. It’s Luna.”

Hermione’s head snapped up.

“I'm Luna Lovegood.”

person FalonIce
schedule June 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was really good. I loved the development of the relationship and the variety of sex scenes. I read it all the way through in one go. Thanks for writing it
person MzPearlz
schedule April 19, 2016 at 12:00 AM
No prob at all! I have written before (it was shit, still is) and I know how it feels to grt those reviews but I believe authors like you need freaking books xD mot only because of the plot and themes but because of how well you hrt your point across! Plus. Snarkyness. I Love. The snark :D I also loved the ending! Ahh yes. But I'll keep my eye out for that one shot! ,3
schedule April 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM
"Maybe I have no fucking idea what his motivations were. He didn’t tell me!"--Hahahaha! I know, he's so secretive. "And of course, the mystery signature at the bottom of the letter is OO"--LOL! That's great. It was exciting enough reading it in summary form :) And no rubber chickens for me. I don't like to eat poultry let alone shove it up my lady business. I loved this ending. As always your finales are sweet and sexy (just the way I like them). Calder and Jaeger get a second chance. I was wondering if I should include them in my predictions. (Calder and Jaeger get together and open a hardware store. 50% off ropes and rigging.) Shaun is working out his guilt through physical labor. (So much healthier than cliff-diving). Sarah and Dennis get to make beautiful music together. Luna's staying on to help (and fuck George). Excellent. Ellory was ultimately helped by the sunflowers. And her tension seems warranted with so much going on in her private life. They need some couples' counseling. Groin tension. Hahahaha! That's what happens when you're carrying around Nessy in your trousers. “And why am I fat with a pointy head?” Snort! Overall great ending to this great story. I think this is my favorite so far.